Reviews for Take Another Look In The Mirror, Honey
MadameCissy chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
This was a beautiful freeverse. I love the descriptions you used, the thoughts and the emotion that can be felt. The different angles between the two are showing them how two people can see things so different.
Morghen chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
This is beautiful! The more I read of this pairing, the more I like it. The way Marlene was able to see the beauty that Alice couldn't was perfect and the way you described it was amazing. The flow of the poem carried well through out the whole thing and I would love to read more freeverse poems from you.

"(Because you're tired

Of the lies

She's bee herself.)"

That part really jumped out at me and it's probably my favorite.

Great job!

sheriff stilinski chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Never thought of Marlene/Alice. Cuteee pairing! Meloveslovesloves the angsttt.
hot chocolate mess chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
that was very touching.
Charlie'sDragon chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
This was so sweet- love love love your Alice/Marlene.


Love from,

icedintheveins chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
AWWW! This made a grin pop onto my face. Amazingly written. And some people really, honestly can't get the whole visual appeal of FreeVerse, but you've got it down perfectly. You make me love this pairing. (:
alieboo chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Wow i loved it! It was cool.
Dream of Many Dreams chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Ah, it's sweet. I like it, so good job!
Rosa Clearwater chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
This may not seem deep to others, but to me it kind of did. I liked it
TannaCarien870 chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Great job! I love all of your free verse!
Perchance A Primrose chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
This was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up. :)