|Reviews for Adolescence: Strike of Midnight|
| Melly chapter 7 . 2/18
I beg u please dun do the lemon part:'(
| elixxxrangel chapter 15 . 2/6
such a compelling story! I wish it was continued but its ok :)
| okaygreenistheenemy chapter 15 . 1/22
this story is very interesting! you're a very talented writer.
| That Weird FanGirl You Hate chapter 15 . 1/6
Wow, this is great Len/Rin fanfic! It's written so well and I love how you portrayed their relationship. It's so cute. I really enjoy reading this. Hopefully, you can find some time to update it one of these days. :)
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/10/2014
It's a really good story! It goes perfectly with the song Adolescence, Iys like, An After story. Keep typing *
When's the next chapter gonna be done?
| Meslovewriting chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
Vocabularies great and all, but it's unnatrual and gives your story a fake aspect to it. Who says "nullify" to there CLOSE brother when their tired of that type of life? It also makes you seem pretentious. Try to sound more natural and stay n character. I know it's a bit hard but think, would blank character who has blank past really do/allow this? I could give a bunch of examples, but I don't have much time. In any case, have fun writing and don't mind grammar (not one bit) until your done putting out all your creativity. Make scenes more fun and interesting by making us guess and not telling us how exactly a character feels. Like you'd think a cat loving character loves all cats but he doesn't and you make it fit somehow into context. That makes a character real and unique.
| sorallinaFactory chapter 15 . 10/4/2014
will you continue this? please don't waste such a good story :(
| aurora0914 chapter 15 . 9/30/2014
this is getting really good! I enjoyed it.
One thought, however, that I found unrealistic.
Incest is not really that widespread. I find it highly doubtful that the mother would notice that Len 'eyed' her - and even if she did, she'd keep reassuring herself that it was nothing, denying anything and everything until the very last moment - and even then, she'd still have her doubts.
If she suspected something like that, anyway, she'd separate them sooner.
The love is really beautiful. I like it. But why are they giving into their parents so much? Shouldn't they voice what they want a bit more?
Like I mentioned, keep up the good work. It's a fantastic story.
| Dark Angel chapter 15 . 8/20/2014
Please keep writing .You are creating a masterpiece .And I would like to have another love scene with our two lovers.
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/13/2014
Luv it! :)
| VocaloidFan chapter 15 . 4/6/2014
I love this Adolescence fanfiction of your I truly love it been reading it non-stop keep up the good work I wanna know what happens next w I'm all excited! If you have the next chapter I'll keep reading I wanna know I wanna know what'll happen
| AMS chapter 15 . 2/23/2014
MOAR I NEED MOAR this is one of the better story's I've ever read keep it up
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/30/2014
Update this it's good but old.
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/22/2014
Why did u have to die? :(
| Lilia chapter 15 . 12/19/2013