Reviews for Heroic Suburbanites
JohnTitor chapter 9 . 6/22/2015
In that moment, he might had been the most handsome man Diana had ever seen.

"Pretty."

The word slipped from her lips before she even realized it. When she did, she blushed and turned away.

Always cracks me up.
Misyel chapter 51 . 4/28/2015
How about if everyone is betting about this suburbia...
one after another...
damn...
true love came huh...
love this story ever...
Misyel chapter 35 . 4/28/2015
Wow...
how many bets are we talking about?
first diana-bruce, then all of the justice league...
then the Gods of Greece, then suddenly THOR!
wow...
Misyel chapter 9 . 4/27/2015
They will turn their hearts into each other...
CrazyCannibal chapter 29 . 4/10/2015
Sorry but the writing about the persona's of Clark Kent and Superman are off here. Superman isn't some day job it is apart of who he is. Superman is Kal-El the last son of krypton and the legacy of his people is something he holds dear to him and is persona he will have till the day he dies while Clark Kent will be gone by the time he is 70-80. Before learning he was Superman Clark Kent was exactly like Superman as he didn't have anything to hide at that time he acted as he normally does but for the sake of protecting his loved ones he turned Clark Kent into a pseudo persona while he kept his usual behavior for the time he is Superman.

If the problem with the show was that he didn't want to be seen with Wonder Woman as Clark Kent then he should've gone as Superman, Flash and Hawkgirl turn up no problem so he should've done the same.
Aliana Grayson chapter 51 . 3/22/2015
Ugghhh hated it, why id you make Diana and Clark get together my opinion it was awful
Anon Non Non chapter 25 . 1/18/2015
For starters, I truly enjoyed this fic at some parts. Especially those hilarious moments showing how little Diana knows about Man's world. However, in the last few chapters I've read, I'm finding it less amusing and the story has become a lot more of "telling" rather than "showing". On top of this, I found myself disliking some characters I usually like in this fic. I'll try reading a few more chapters or so and see if my view of this fanfic changes any...
supereman chapter 51 . 10/17/2014
I loved every bit of this story, thank you for writing it!
supereman chapter 50 . 10/17/2014
Finally after a month of marriage Clark and Diana are able to consummate their love. I'm a little surprised though with how long it took for them to get rid of Cubby and LuAnn.
supereman chapter 49 . 10/17/2014
The part at the end was really sweet!
supereman chapter 48 . 10/15/2014
Wow, what a battle between Diana and Lashina! The Toyman save at the end was a little bit unexpected. On another note, Mary Marvel is hilarious with her little mood swings from pure to potty mouth when provoked.
supereman chapter 47 . 10/10/2014
Looks like the final round is fast approaching Lashina is back!
supereman chapter 46 . 10/9/2014
I'm happy that Diana at least got to finish her fun time in the tube before she was interrupted by Dinah. And hopefully The Flash really will get lucky tonight!
supereman chapter 45 . 10/8/2014
Finally Clark got to have a little revenge on Diana for teasing him earlier in the story. I'm also interested to see how the confrontation between Bruce and Constantine will go down over the lovely Zatanna.
supereman chapter 44 . 10/7/2014
Now the four feet rule is on the other foot.
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