Reviews for Heroic Suburbanites
Radone chapter 11 . 10/6/2010
Well done. Very nice romantic elements spaced along with perfect pacing.

The beginning setup, with the explanation of 'food' was very well thought out and executed. It brought the importance of the small restaurant to the forefront.

Looking forward to how this goes.
Wonderbee31 chapter 11 . 10/6/2010
That was a swell part here, reallyu enjoyed their having a nice night out, and then getting so caught up in the moment that the romance blosssomed for a second, and will look forward to what happens from that point on.
BenderTheOffender chapter 11 . 10/6/2010
Excellent update!

Can't wait for more
Proponent of EVO chapter 11 . 10/6/2010
See, this is the least believable part of the story so far. Clark kisses Diana, and then, through some insane, supernatural strength of will, manages not to turn to a pile of contented goo at her feet. Just impossible. ;)

Thanks for writing!
unoaranya30 chapter 11 . 10/6/2010
Gorgeous chapter. But then I'm extremely biased :-).

The depth and ease of their friendship is well captured. Their physical attraction while obvious to everyone else is something they both tend to ignore but in these circumstances they were overwhelmed.

Disappointing of Clark to pull away but understandable since he believes Diana is in love with his friend.

Beautifully crafted chapter
Ratdogtwo chapter 11 . 10/5/2010
another amazing chapter keep up the great work
HELLACRE13 chapter 10 . 10/4/2010
Nice chapter.

Meeting the neighbours was fun! Diana does have a sense of humor even as off as it was...maybe that's what Kal will learn to like about her. Her weird sense of humor.

Hmm so Bruce is gonna use Zee and Zee thinks she is gonna use the opportunity to get to Clark...but seriously even if she did not go after him cause of Diana...she does not care about the fact Clark cares for Lois then? Way to go there, Zee.

Wally must be the wisest person in all of this for a change. Hmm, you know be nice one day to see if Wally can get one of those gals.

Nice to see Diana a little jealous.
booeygirl89 chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
Hands down best part of the chapter, Diana tipping the neighbors for the coffee cake. Haha
Wonderbee31 chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
Loved Diana and her sometime clulessness, and sometimes getting it square on, and will look forward to what their arrival continues to do to the neighborhood, though Bruce is starting to get even more creepy, and makes me wish Albert'd give him a solid smack or two, rather than simply enabling him all the time.
Proponent of EVO chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
I'm really enjoying this! Hope you don't mind, I've added this to the C2 so that future generations can enjoy it as well. ;)
BenderTheOffender chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
Great updates.

Loved how Diana is already being jealous of how other women look at Clark.

Please update soon
HarimaHige chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
another good chapter.
Nightwing 509 chapter 10 . 10/3/2010
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you described how Clark & Diana was dealing with meeting their neighbors for the first time. Please update soon.
Ratdogtwo chapter 10 . 10/2/2010
another awsome chapter keep up the great work.
unoaranya30 chapter 10 . 10/2/2010
Always love your Flash Zatanna interactions. They always rip a smile, a laugh or both from me :-)

The coffee cake was fun and it's great that you're using Chubby and Luann again.

The discomfort on Diana's part was very cute.

Look forward to more
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