|Reviews for Heroic Suburbanites|
| kihakukage chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
| john777 chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
Zatanna magic can get around that Man of Steel thing.
| acepro Evolution chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
It seems that the seeds of lust have begun to grow. It makes you Wonder if that Woman ever considered whether things between her and Clark might have started creating such feelings between them. Diana may be naive when it comes to the new world but she is not naive enough to know how she feels when it concerns other things. This leads me to a question (which I cannot remember if I have asked you before.)
Since Diana was raised on an island with a population made up of only woman and other mythical creatures, would you say it is accurate how she is feeling in her current situation with Superman? In order for such feelings to exist she would have had to have had some form of sex education or encounter with men at a young age to create the curiosity that any teenage girl would get from being around a male. But as far as I am aware she was isolated from any form of contact with men or the outside world. So unless she learned from seeing a God likes Apollo or something, how such feelings begin to grow like they have from the day she left her island to now? In the end, her whole romantic interest in Bruce or Clark seems a little premature to even be considered unless there is a factor I am not aware of.
You are probably wondering why I am asking you. I have read all yours stories and decided to accept you as a source of knowledge when concerning DC Comics.
Till next time.
| Kairan1979 chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
All the parts of this chapter were interesting to read. Kal's stream of consciousness. Zee admitting that she is interested in dating him, Dinah and Shayera teasing her mercilessly. And finally, Diana's nervousness and understanding that she doesn't know much about Clark's relationship with Lois.
| HELLACRE13 chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
Haha...that last scene...every woman can appreciate. A shirtless Kal...mmm.
Another really nice chapter. Showing us who Clark is etc. You know it occurs to me Diana does not know Bruce any more than he knows her and Zatanna knows no more of Clark than Lois ever could. It's a crush based on the very things he reflected upon. And I just can't get my head around this Zee. In comics she is so cool and funny and she adores Diana. She looks up to her as one would a bigger sister. There is a kinda of calculating rivalry in Zee here I really don't get. Oh well. I guess she and Lois are going to all prove challenges for Diana.
I hope just like how Diana is discovering parts of Kal...so too he discovers parts of Diana he does not know. Thanks for your fast updates. really appreciate them.
| Wonderbee31 chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
Great part there, and really enjoyed how all the interactions afre going on here, from the worshipers, to the Leauge Ladies,a nd then Diana and Clark, and their trying desperately to get through this without activating any feelings beyond their current ones, greatness!
| unoaranya30 chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
Hi there. just realized that i didn't log in last time. yep. that was me. sorry about that.
you had a couple of gems in this chapter. the first part with Clark remembering how he had to become mild mannered to control his powers and losing out on being noticed by the pretty girls. you really nailed it there. His feelings for Diana and his squashing them so as not to hurt his friends is also so very him. beautifully written
the second is of course the Diana scene. her sudden nervousness at sharing the same bed as Kal. Kal's gentleness and politeness and his compliments, all things that will win her heart without either of them realizing it. her complete trust in him in being able to go to sleep without wondering if her best friend will take advantage of her is also very much Superman and shows how much she trusts her best friend.
can't wait for more
| HarimaHige chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
another good one. complicated emotions und parings. It will get interesting.
| Nightwing 509 chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
I enjoyed redaing your story. I liked the way you had Clark & Diana thinking about each other. Please update soon.
| Ratdogtwo chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
another awsome chapter keep up the grea work
| Proponent of EVO chapter 9 . 9/30/2010
Hahahaha - I knew it!
I'm loving this. Thanks for writing!
| shiro-wolfman-k chapter 9 . 9/29/2010
You know, I respect the couples you could like, but Sadly, I am the king of people that don't see any normal woman whit Superman, at least, fisicly, Zatanna ( And I confess, that I do have a lot of resentment for how she treated Raven.) is a human girl, whit magical powers, not very likely too much diferent from a normal Human, maybe a little more resistant, but the Idea of a Little Kal-el in her Belly make me Shudder, a baby thend to not control very much how much force he can put in a punch or a kick, so, little overpowered baby, plus magical powers in a normal woman belly... not a really good Idea.
But this complicate the whole plot, making this be a cuadruple(?SP) love story, Bruce might be interested in Diana, but an Old spark did existed whit Zatanna, Diana thinks she is interested in Bruce, but is her inexperience talking and her feelings are pinning for Kal,one that she might think she has already losed, And Clark is already pining for Louise, but, I guess that this experience would, at least make him sit and review his life, and what he really whant. He need to wake up to the fact that Louise is in love whit a Mask, one of his two, (Clark/Superman) in the end, nobody has ever know the real him, Kal-el. I guess, in this story, don't even him.
And it seems that the atraction is showing herself there pretty often, now Diana did go all Cavewoman whit him, nice, even woman's have desires, sometimes more stronger that what the man could feel.
Thanks for the chapter, It was a life saver, I was almost about to die of boredom.
| whatweareafreaidof chapter 8 . 9/29/2010
i love this story.
i like that this is clark and diana falling in love,
i love the little part about the open married, all the men are going to go after diana, and is they see clark with no shirt on then the women are going to go after him.
hope clark ends up with diana
| cherryberry36 chapter 8 . 9/28/2010
i love all your stories. they have a nice mix of humor and romance. and i always look forward to your new stories and i'm loving this one so far. the story is so different yet its still perfect and still has your very entertaining style of writing. i love love how you develop your characters. keep up the good work. i look forward to seeing the outcome of diana and clark living together :)
| HELLACRE13 chapter 8 . 9/28/2010
This was very well crafted chapter. There is a lot going on even if people think there isn't. You are setting up the field so to speak and the boundaries and rules and the fun will be to see if,when and how they will shatter as usual was great.
My fave part? Diana unpacking Clark's bags. That was super writing, showing her actually envisioning parts of this man she never saw before while she studies his things and what Diana saw in her mind's eyes I really appreciated. I love Clark in his Superman suit,shirtless but something about him in a white shirt with sleeves rolled up,and a pencil between his teeth,typing...yum.