|Reviews for Heroic Suburbanites|
| Kairan1979 chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
I can't imagine Clark forgetting his responsibilities as Superman because of the bet.
Clearly Bruce doesn't see that he could lose. Guess he isn't world's greatest detective if he doesn't know that Diana was attracted to Kal.
| dchero chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
Are we ever going to get a Bruce and Diana story from you?
| HarimaHige chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
Well, is this the seting for this story? I have to say, that you are getting better with the caracters. You also improved in humor. you storys are getting funnier.
I dont have a problem with Batman being a manipulative genius. If the story is good and interessting than its ok. I just hope that he also realises something about himself with this bet.
He has felings for diana, doesnt he? Thats the conclusion of this conversation with Zatana. Will he lose her to Clark.
What will Lois do? Good luck
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
The # 2
What's the Suburbs?
| VFR6 chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Bruce and Zee FTW!
Come on Zee, let Diana have her chance. You already get two stories to bang Superman, and Diana had only one.
*Sigh* you let modred do the mambo with Morgaine...
The temptation to rile up your readers are just too hard to resist isn't it?
I'll try to skip that part whenever I reread the story.
One question, how did First World got destroyed? And the Third for that matter?
| unoaranya30 chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
The # 2
What's the Suburbs?
| Nightwing 509 chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you left everyone guessiong on how Diana convinced Clark to go along with the bet. Please update soon.
| ULTRA SONIC chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Bruce, I get the feeling that you haven't mapped this whole thing out as well as you think you have, and as such I think stuff's gonna happen that I don't think you've really counted on.
Good start on both chapters Wentworth. Keep it up.
P.S.: If you're looking for any Diana/Clark/Hippolyta ideas, the SM/WW fan Archive had two challenges in regards to that (though for some reason those challenges got taken down when it got updated recently). One was in "Hereafter" where instead of being zapped to an alternate future, Clark got zapped to the past where "in his explorations to get home he meets the Amazons led by Hippolyta" and though he manages to keep Heracles' men from intefering in the fight between Heracles and Hipppolyta, Heracles and co. still manage to deceive the Amazons and drug them with the wine (including Clark, but only because Ares magically treated it since regular alcoholic drinks have no effect on him), however, before things get as bad as they originally transpired Clark manages to regain conciousness just in time to stop Heracles from raping the Amazons. Sadly it still doesn't keep the Amazons from being exiled but Hippolyta does acknowledge Superman as a man she respects and she wishes that she could've met him under different circumstances so he could have been hers. Clark finally manages to get back to the present where a distraught Diana realizes who her heart belongs to, and it's Clark. Before Clark starts anything with Diana he asks to see Hippolyta one more time and the two "go from there on, wondering what was with their relatonship in the past, and if Clark can have a relationship with Diana". The second challenge was where Clark crashes on Themyscira after pushing the giant kryptonite island away from Earth in "Superman Returns" and as he's recovering, Hippolyta and Diana both end up going after him for his affections.
All in all, interesting ideas.
| jlg123 chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Very interesting. This could go many ways. Diana does not know what she is in for and neither does Bruce. Update soon.
| john777 chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Interesting, but what with Lois.
| HELLACRE13 chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Nice update. Oh Clark, Diana had you wound around her little finger already? ;)I always liked Zee with Bruce. They had great chemistry in TAS, Detective comics and JLA last year. I never got Zee with Clark. It's odd, like putting him with randomly with Canary or Vixen. Guess since they never had anything in comics or cartoon I can't see where Zee gets this crush from.
But Diana does need to learn a lot. She is clueless in many ways. Batman is right. Diana in comics is very different from JL/JLU Diana. She is self sufficient and a thoughtful and unselfish person. Apart from the obvious humor, please allow Diana some character development and growth like the comics. And Clark too. It's bad enough he is Lois' lapdog, I really wouldn't like to see him become Diana's or Zee's as 's my one critique of your Clark, who I guess is really JL/JLU's Clark. He is always very reactive, just letting stuff happen, instead of the proactive confident leader we know he can be.
| Proponent of EVO chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Oh, Clark - you can't fly away fast enough to escape a woman's ire.
| Fostersb chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
That was great interaction between all the group members. I laughed out loud with Plastic Man. I actually really hope that Batman can become closer to Zatanna because I have always been a Batman/Zee fan so it would be nice to have them together too. I am definitely looking forward to seeing Diana's first reaction of the burbs and the people's reaction to her and Clark as man and wife.
| EroSlackerMicha chapter 2 . 9/12/2010
Even more awesomeness and I have a feeling this will be a riot. Wonder if Lois staggers across the happy couple and goes nuclear. should be a fun journey either way. keep it up.
| Fostersb chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Great start to the story. I love how strong and defiant WW is when faced with a challenge. I hope that throughout the story he will give up her infatuation with Batman and start coming back to Superman.