Reviews for Heroic Suburbanites
HELLACRE13 chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
LOL.I love how you wrote Hippolyta. Very shrewd yet wise and a typical protective mom. Haha pushing her to give up the bet. Oh Diana is going to dig her heels in. All the men suddenly became Neanderthal...she pretty... lol.

I want to see how Clark handles this. And you are really good with the regular updates. Thanks.
Nightwing 509 chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
I enjoyed reading your story. i liked how you described the reaction of the Movers when they saw Diana without a T-shirt on. And how you had Hippolyta try to get Diana to call the bet off. Please update soon.
Exodus5 chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
Isn't this a little over the top for Superman to go through with this? He could just run away at super speed they would never catch him.
HarimaHige chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
"Poor bastard,' Bruce muttered. "I think I'm going to owe Clark more than just an interview." This was the best Batman phrase ever. I couldnt stop laughing out loud.

You gave me the rest with the wedding thing. What a great chapter.

What i didnt get was, did Diana only wear a t-shirt? No underwear? I wish i were one of the movers.
Kairan1979 chapter 5 . 9/19/2010
Nice plan, Hyppolyta! I bet Clark is having a panic attack!
LycoX chapter 5 . 9/18/2010
Lmfao! Great chapter here! I loved Bruce's reaction to finding out that Clark has to talk to Diana's mother! Loving what happens when her mother springs her plan on Clark and Diana too!
HarimaHige chapter 4 . 9/18/2010
Clark has to meet the queen? Oh boy. I hope he gets out there alive.

good chapter
HELLACRE13 chapter 4 . 9/17/2010
That form signing and picture taking with Kara was great. Love how you wrote Clark here...warm as always and yet quite witty. And Diana, good stuff letting us see how much she really has to understand about the world. Kara is a she took the photos I was cracking up.

"Lean a little more into him, Diana,' Kara instructed, as she looked through the camera at the two of them. Diana licked her lips nervously and then leaned into him. She could feel Clark's muscular chest against her and was suddenly very aware of being so close to him.

"Smile!'

They both managed something that resembled a smile just before the flash went off.

"Stay there, I want to get couple more,' Kara quickly said. She shifted a little closer, keeping the camera trained on them the whole time.

"Now look at each other."

Both turned their heads at the same time and were suddenly looking into the other's eyes. Nervous smiles came to both their lips and then the flash went off again.

"Now kiss,' Kara instructed.

"Okay, Annie Leibovitz, I think we're done with the photos,'
Wonderbee31 chapter 4 . 9/17/2010
Oh boy, so Clark gets to meet his pretend Mom in law, the one that carries a big axe, and speaks loudly too...he'll be lucky to be able to walk away with what all Diana's been saying about this bet to her, LOL.
deathangel3188 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
This is brilliant! I'm love this chapter, what with all the pornstar names..hilarious!
Nightwing 509 chapter 4 . 9/17/2010
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you have Clark worrying about meeting Queen Hippolyata. Please update soon.
Fostersb chapter 4 . 9/17/2010
I love Kara trying to push Diana and Kal together and I can't wait to see the conversation between Kal and Diana's mother.
Proponent of EVO chapter 4 . 9/17/2010
Ah, I'm really enjoying this. The awkwardness on Clark's part is pretty fantastic.
LycoX chapter 4 . 9/16/2010
Lmfao! I just love what Kara was trying to do! And I am looking forward to Clark's conversation with Diana's mom!
BenderTheOffender chapter 4 . 9/16/2010
Hilarious chapter!

Can't wait for more
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