|Reviews for That Girl Outtakes|
| KimiD chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Man, I came over to your page hoping you had already written the sequel... I can understand your hesitance when you think of all the dark ways the story can go, especially with the Volturi. Although I am soo curious as to who her boyfriend is I cannot remember in a while a story I have enjoyed as much as this one. You are a very proficient writer and keep your reader on the edge of their seat... I look forward to Any of the outtakes you put up here for this lovely story KimiD
| KimiD chapter 2 . 10/20/2014
loved his pov of this!
| brenda chapter 2 . 1/20/2012
this part was beautiful wish all men felt like this
| brenda chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
well i think your story sucks about that girl sure u said there will no imprinting but u did it anyway didnt you u just couldnt leave well enough alone , couldnt u let resemese have a life that didnt have warewolfs in it
| ladeerelli chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Aww no sequel :-( ok. But still no epilogue...
| k1942 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Pretty tough stuff, from Bella's POV! Thank God she didn't kill Mary or her dad. Things worked out okay, except for the Blacks. Sure enjoyed That Girl, too!
| k1942 chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
I really loved this chapter in That Girl, but it was nearly as good from Edward's POV. Birth is such an emotional experience for a woman, but dads get a huge share of that too. Especially dads like Edward!
| BELAVERA chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
That was beautiful...
| mrs cullen15 chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
That was so cute! please make another chapter soon!
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
That was absolutely sweet...
| sconnolly318 chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Awwww, how awesome!
Sorry I'm late in reading!
| gooshoes chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Beautiful...I love EPOV of practically anything but most especially Bella giving birth. This was probably the best one I've read. Thanks for your hard work. Happy New Year!
| Bammers chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Loved it so very much thanks for sharing and update when you can...
| Kimmie43 chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Loved it. Great chapter.
| erm31323 chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
Oh, I just loved this. So sweet.