Reviews for That Girl Outtakes
KimiD chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Man, I came over to your page hoping you had already written the sequel... I can understand your hesitance when you think of all the dark ways the story can go, especially with the Volturi. Although I am soo curious as to who her boyfriend is I cannot remember in a while a story I have enjoyed as much as this one. You are a very proficient writer and keep your reader on the edge of their seat... I look forward to Any of the outtakes you put up here for this lovely story KimiD
KimiD chapter 2 . 10/20/2014
loved his pov of this!
brenda chapter 2 . 1/20/2012
this part was beautiful wish all men felt like this
brenda chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
well i think your story sucks about that girl sure u said there will no imprinting but u did it anyway didnt you u just couldnt leave well enough alone , couldnt u let resemese have a life that didnt have warewolfs in it
ladeerelli chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Aww no sequel :-( ok. But still no epilogue...
k1942 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Pretty tough stuff, from Bella's POV! Thank God she didn't kill Mary or her dad. Things worked out okay, except for the Blacks. Sure enjoyed That Girl, too!
k1942 chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
I really loved this chapter in That Girl, but it was nearly as good from Edward's POV. Birth is such an emotional experience for a woman, but dads get a huge share of that too. Especially dads like Edward!
BELAVERA chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
That was beautiful...
mrs cullen15 chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
That was so cute! please make another chapter soon!
Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 2 . 1/6/2011
That was absolutely sweet...

sconnolly318 chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Awwww, how awesome!

Sorry I'm late in reading!
gooshoes chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Beautiful...I love EPOV of practically anything but most especially Bella giving birth. This was probably the best one I've read. Thanks for your hard work. Happy New Year!
Bammers chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Loved it so very much thanks for sharing and update when you can...
Kimmie43 chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Loved it. Great chapter.
erm31323 chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
Oh, I just loved this. So sweet.
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