Reviews for A Death Eater to the Core?
notwolf chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
I do see Lucius like that. He fought on Voldy's side because he'd been Marked and he had to. He couldn't run away or he'd be killed, and he loved his family too much to put them in that jeopardy.
Violet Wild chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I love how you wrote about the difference between how Lucius felt about being a Death Eater the first time compared to how he feels about being a Death Eater the second time, I've always thought that having a child would completely shift his priorities too. But, some of the sentences were a little choppy. It seems like you were trying to create kind of a list effect ("if...if...if..."), which would have worked well if some of the sentences were a little better written. Just my opinion though, other than that, great story.