Reviews for Strawberries and Vampires Part 1
Ms Marshmallow-chan chapter 1 . 1/29
okay...first things first...
why does Ichigo Curse so much! people go to schools for fighting?
23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 8 . 11/7/2016
I wasn't gonna review cause when I don't like something in a fic I just stop reading it, I don't review and mention what I didn't like.
But I'm gonna do it for this one, your Ichigo was fucking annoying in both Sav and Once is never enough. In this Ichigo disliked Shuuhei for cheating on him, well guess what you're fucking doing with Shirosaki now, you fucking hypocrite. I've felt strongly for Hangeng from Super Junior for over 6 years now. If I had a boyfriend and loved him truly, I wouldn't go fantasising about some other man. Ichigo's reaction to Shirosaki pissed me off, for some weird reason it made me cry too. This is fanfiction for fuck's sake. I could never trust Ichigo again if I were Grimmjow.
Ichigo agreed to mark him and wow what a way to start of the beginning of a new bond! I can tell how much he treasures it!
In "once is never enough" you made Ichigo act so fucking bipolar and when you made him lose his memories of Grimmjow, I was like "Well I've had enough of the drama. Time to stop."
alicia.jen.havens chapter 5 . 7/24/2016
I wished you hadn't quit writing. You're terribly talented you know. I've enjoyed reading your stories. I figure life took you in a different direction. If you ever come back I'd love to know.
Gdlilgothgrl79 chapter 14 . 6/20/2016
You should not feel bad about writing about rape. As a person who has been raped, I actually think it helps get the message out there tat you should not be ashamed if it happens to you cuz its not your fault. I also use stories like this as a sort of immersion therapy, you know if your afraid or have a trauma against something, you purposely put yourself in similar situations to get over your fear or trauma. My counselor suggested it and it really works. So don't feel bad you just may help someone whos too afraid to speak up, or someone like me who uses it as part of therapy. But yes you should post a warning for anything that may be a trigger like rape, suicide, drugs, ect. I'm enjoying your story so far needs a little work on grammar n such but great story line. Keep up the good work
Sepulvedlore chapter 29 . 5/4/2016
Where's the rest!? D: nuuuuu i am so in love with this story...whyyyyy...
OhMy56 chapter 29 . 12/9/2015
yeah I love this and I have so many ideas running through my head it is killing me. Thank you for writing this, but please, please, please continue do not give up this is amazing:)
hotta chapter 27 . 8/18/2015
I'm gonna read this a second time, it is just so utterly worth it. I love how your build the characters the thrill of their journey, of how hot ichigo is beneath Shiro and Grimmjow. Oh oh oh u can definitely publish your own works,I'll gladly purchase them
hotta chapter 25 . 8/17/2015
Your writing moves buildings, I am so in love with your wiritng, oh how I wish u we're still writing :'( it is so addictive I can't get enough
Ino Death chapter 29 . 5/31/2015
I NEED MORE! PLEASE GIVE ME MORE! i NEEDS A PART TWO! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US ON A DAMNED CLIFFHANGER AND NOT UPDATE FOR 2 YEARS QAQ! *cries* Please update and I will give you the biggest cookie in the world.
Ino Death chapter 21 . 5/24/2015
Why not just bring shiro into their relationship? X3 Lolz, they all like each other enough, why the hell not?
Ino Death chapter 17 . 5/24/2015
ok so Ichi's not pregger's he's the child of a vampire and a human? Or he's preggers and is having a gay baby?
Sarah chapter 23 . 1/26/2015
Good chapter. But... Why Urahara? I don't understand why you chose him. Oh well. Whatever. But it really was a good chapter.
Zayabel Draga chapter 4 . 9/21/2014
I think I'm wet from imagining Marco... make him my mate please GOD! I'd like him to be *long series of beeps that cover words that are too sensitive for the ears of children* *sigh* sexy hell of a man xD
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2014
There's a shit ton of things wrong with Twilight. The sparkling is 1 among hundreds.
Sirrophi chapter 20 . 10/11/2013
I was crying by the end *sniffle* I l-loved it... *hic*
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