|Reviews for Strawberries and Vampires Part 1|
| IhateTwilightforevr chapter 20 . 10/11/2013
I was crying by the end *sniffle* I l-loved it... *hic*
| IhateTwilightforevr chapter 16 . 10/11/2013
*almost dies of bloodloss* "
I... loved... i... *passes out*
| IhateTwilightforevr chapter 2 . 10/11/2013
I can't stand that they made them sparkle in twilight, hence my name, but this is a great story so far! I'm loving this story!
| angelwolfie1998 chapter 29 . 4/5/2013
At first I wasn't sure about reading a new story and I was running out of options on what to read then I found this, when I first started it I wasn't sure but as I continued it got better and better, there were a few typo's but it was so good I looked past it this is an awesome story I love it! Its so captivating and it's a great read I will definitely reccomend this to my Fanfic loving friends please update soon! .
| Line chapter 8 . 2/19/2013
The story is great! And really funny at times xd One of the best grimmichi I've read (and I read a lot..) But please check your grammar, the faults are greatly annoying... Sorry...
| BeautifulCherryBlossom chapter 29 . 1/24/2013
Stupid stupid ending! gah! I want mooore.
Just when the bad guy shows up as well. this ain't nice! :P
A really good story BTW, I'm faving this
| honeyMellon chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Aww I'm loving this story already. It's so cute! And I love your writing style: light-hearted and flows well. :)
| dream.forever.yourself chapter 29 . 10/6/2012
you are sooo mean you never finished this stroy it is soooooooo goood and i wnt to know what happens next! So please please please write more i am begging because it says complete
| shadeofpurple chapter 12 . 9/17/2012
I really like how this fic is coming out right now and you do a great job at writing smut but unfortunately ill have to stop here. Shiro coming into the stiry bothered me at first but I thought none of it and that ichigo would flip him off if anything were to happen. Apparently this story doesnt revolve around a totally monogamous relationship which is what I perfer. Sure im all for threesomes and hot orgies but only in pwps. None the less I enjoyed this story to some extent so good job and keep it up.
| JelloXGiggles chapter 28 . 7/20/2012
Omg I love the whole story and I can't wait for the next part! But you do have a few grammar mistakes, word choice problems, like where it's supposed to be 'their' but instead you put they're or 'hole' instead of 'whole'. Then there's your over usage of 'ya' it kinda gets old and there are places where it would make much more sense if you put 'yeah' or 'yup'. You need some more variety in your word choice. I hope that you take that into consideration when you write part 2. And I really hope you finish 'paint me in red' so that you can start writing part 2. Well, I think that's bout it. Good luck! The jello is out! XD
| NeryRukia chapter 29 . 5/19/2012
Hi there Crytalmoon23! I'm becoming a huge fan of your work *-*! I've read about half of the fics you have here! But i'm really concern with the fact that you have uploaded no more :C..What's wrong? You said you would upload a 2nd part of this fic but nothing has come out so far..sigh...I wish and plead to you for a new update...we're already on 2012 and I havent seen any from this year!
Greetings from Venezuela3
| Wrath4life chapter 25 . 5/2/2012
Yay! Shiro and Kisuke are together now, so glad Shiro some what made up with Grim and Ichi I'm sure they have a lot of questions to ask Shiro and now I'm curious if you somehow make a twist that Shiro and Ichi are brothers lol.
I would feel sorry for Grimmy and I'm sure Kisuke wouldn't be surprised and probably knew about it nice job pairing these couple can't wait to read what happens next. :)
| Wrath4life chapter 24 . 4/25/2012
Shiro and Kisuke together? Hmm...well it was hot don't get me wrong. I actually like this couple even though, I was more use to Shiro/Stark and Shiro/Gin awesome job of writing this chapter. At least now Shiro won't feel jealous of Ichi and Grimm anymore though I wonder, how will those two take it that Shiro with their so called art teacher and he even marked him too better than him, than with Hisagi that would suck for Ichi having to deal with that. :/
| Wrath4life chapter 21 . 4/24/2012
Why can't it be like that in vampire Diaries sharing is caring you know. Lol okay, I kinda skimmed at this chapter I love the concert part but when it came down to Grimmy being uke um...no thank you and I guess it turned out to be a threesome when I got to the end. Ha! I love how Shiro said that instead of going to church on sun they should just Fuck lmfao. XD I'm actually glad that Shiro and Grimmy don't mind the whole sharing Ichi, but I'm feeling a little loss will Ichi end up liking both or just Grimmy?
Yes, I know he's confessed his love even as they are marked that doesn't mean Ichi won't get over his rockstar crush especially, if your gonna lead to something bad that Ichi and shiro hurt Grim like in that bizarre nightmarish dream Ichi had. O.o
| Wrath4life chapter 18 . 4/23/2012
Wow...all this happened after the whole threesome lol. Glad Ichi enjoying himself being a vampire bet the threesome will get even better, also dam Marco how the heck did he knew about Ichi size lol. XD
I like how shiro kept suggesting he took steroids and he's wearing a wig that made laugh, so loving this especially Ichi ability to read emotions wonder what happens next in the next chappy. :3