Reviews for A Night for Firsts
PrincessMaylin chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
This was so beautiful. It wasn't porn or smut, but pure love, and you keep them in character so well. I just saw Mockingjay Part 2 yesterday and I think they did Finnick's death justice. It was far more emotional than it was in the book for so many reasons. I'm in the process of writing an Annie-finds-out-she's-pregnant-after-Finnick's-death story, and I think I'm going to go for a mixture of the book and the movie, because the movie did such a fantastic job with not only portraying Finnick's death, but also with foreshadowing it (with the "Star Squad" intro scene in particular; you can find it on YouTube if you don't remember which scene it is, but it brought a lot of tears to my eyes.) Fantastic work to you! Thanks for sharing!

Hugs,
May
Miss Odair chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Love it
skywalker17 chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
Wow. I'm not a fan of the Hunger Games, but this was AMAZING! So beautiful and poignant! Thanks for writing this :)
L chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Best Odesta I've read. Beautiful, true to character, and very well written. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
AHHH that was so sweet. I love this ship
There my Hunger Games OTP and I'm currently writing a Finnick/ Annie story cause there so cute. I think you captured Annie's character perfectly. I loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
awesome :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
This is absolutely beautiful writing...sweet yet passionate, and so unlike some fanfics that concentrate on the act itself and the pornographic part of it instead of what those two people feel and think, which is mostly everything in the human experience.
christti chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
They're so cute! In my mind, they made love long before the 75th hunger games, but i loved you're take on they're first night!
Mafer Longbottom-Hudgens chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
awwwww. this story is just beautiful as is their relationship. full of love.
Rin Is The Grudge Lady chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
so beautiful I'm crying
Theweirdgeekyone chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
This was perfect. That is all :)
Blairx6661 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
I thought this was brilliant and insightful, and I really like it :D
me chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
That's beautiful
What chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
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Sweet Sleepless Melody chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Now THIS is possibly one of the most beautiful pieces of erotica and pathos I have seen in a while. I just love who you paint their emotions so well and still manage to tie that emotion into the act of coitus. I could still understand what was going on and the flow was just beautiful.

You are truly a master of your craft, dear!

-Melody
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