Reviews for A Night for Firsts
skywalker17 chapter 1 . 11/21
Wow. I'm not a fan of the Hunger Games, but this was AMAZING! So beautiful and poignant! Thanks for writing this :)
L chapter 1 . 5/1
Best Odesta I've read. Beautiful, true to character, and very well written. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
AHHH that was so sweet. I love this ship
There my Hunger Games OTP and I'm currently writing a Finnick/ Annie story cause there so cute. I think you captured Annie's character perfectly. I loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
awesome :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
This is absolutely beautiful writing...sweet yet passionate, and so unlike some fanfics that concentrate on the act itself and the pornographic part of it instead of what those two people feel and think, which is mostly everything in the human experience.
christti chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
They're so cute! In my mind, they made love long before the 75th hunger games, but i loved you're take on they're first night!
Mafer Longbottom-Hudgens chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
awwwww. this story is just beautiful as is their relationship. full of love.
Rin Is The Grudge Lady chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
so beautiful I'm crying
Theweirdgeekyone chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
This was perfect. That is all :)
Blairx6661 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
I thought this was brilliant and insightful, and I really like it :D
me chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
That's beautiful
What chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Sweet Sleepless Melody chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Now THIS is possibly one of the most beautiful pieces of erotica and pathos I have seen in a while. I just love who you paint their emotions so well and still manage to tie that emotion into the act of coitus. I could still understand what was going on and the flow was just beautiful.

You are truly a master of your craft, dear!

patiecamargo chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Loved it, awn s2
Arriane Malum chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
This is the sweetest thing.
I really liked how vulnerable you made Finnick feel and how he was unsure of himself, but at the same time he knew what to do. It was realistically put together and i really enjoyed that.
Annie was frail, yet playful and it makes me feel like that's the part of Annie that she's reserved for Finnick alone.
The whole thing, the wedding night, Finnick's thoughts and Annie's vulnerability.
Well-written, engaging story and a beyond-beautiful couple.
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