I suspected Naruto from the moment it meant blond hair

Nice story

This was a really interesting one shot. It was amusing and fun. I really can see Lee and Naruto as detectives.

Nice and funny, excellent plot and full of suspense :P

I like it. Keep up the good work. :)

Okay, I have to say, this was hilarious. You should continue this!

This was hilarious. I especially loved the big deduction and reveal of the mystery at the end. Your writing always pulls me along for the ride so i wasn't thinking far enough ahead to actually figure it out for myself until Lee did.

Great ending too. Thanks for the fun time.

roflmao awesome story i love the pipe and hat especially bc it reminded me of ur other story but i think it's more comical in the other story bc hinata has no idea y he has it.

a good tale. too bad its only a one shot. I would have loved to see these two continue on and maybe become the first ever world famous detectives in the ninja world. uncovering plots and conspericies, because the ninja world is full of them. I could just see more stories to go along with this, Hinata disappears, and only the Flames of youth Detective agency can find her! epic.

keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing what you can do.

i don't review very often but this realy did make want to it whold be an intresting read if you kape going with it civlin, ninja clints.

I loved this! It was hilarious!

Ahahaha! SO epic! xD Nice idea. First person Rock Lee worked out really well for this story. :D Thanks for the entertaining read!

Interesting story.

This is pretty long actually, but I had to admit that it was funny. I've always liked Rock Lee. Energetic, funny guy.

Anyway, it was refreshing to read something that wasn't all romance for once. Keep up the good work!

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I loved every word. A very surprising twist at the end. Never saw it coming. Only thing I don't like is that it's a one-shot. I would love to read more of these.

This was so funny!

The way you portrayed Lee and Naruto was great, especially the tiny little detail of the bubble-blowing pipe.

I've just started reading Sherlock Holmes, and it made me think of that. the POV of Lee looked a lot like the POV of Doctor Watson, but he was like the role of Holmes, finding the clues and all...

And the thief being Naruto... It was a twist, and a very funny one. Who would have thought that he would steal a RIBBON just to get Sakura's attention?

I'm hoping that you're writing more of Detective Lee!

That...was an EXCELLENT story! :D I loved it! Honestly, it was very creative. Why would someone want to steal ribbon, I kept asking myself. Ah! And you're writing style was perfect 'Lee'. I was laughing the whole way through. I love you, stranger. I really do!