Reviews for Without a Trace
The Golden Phoenix Song chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Like your previous reviewer said, your ability to take what little information we knew about Mayumi and turn it into that was astounding.

To me, if you turned that into a cutscene in Persona 4, it would fit perfectly. Mayumi's Shadow was amazingly well written.

All in all, fantastic writing. Well done.
KeRose chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Whoa. Deep. I would never be able to interpolate how it would be like for Mayumi Yamano to face her shadow. I mean we were given very little info about her in the game so I am sure yo had to take some liberties in writing the background. But, once again, you surprised me and were able to form a believable story that offers insight into how it is that the characters who died, failed to face their shadows.

My favorite part was your usage of the small room as a tool for facing her self: the noose, in particular.

Wondering if you could possibly do a Saki-senpai one; curious to see your thoughts on that one.

~K~( )