Reviews for Unusual Absence
Erisah Mae chapter 2 . 2/26
Wow. That's really messed up.

It's Izaya's body, and Shizuo outright threatening to kill him if he doesn't carry the baby to term? Wow. I've never even heard of that kind of thing outside of fundamentalist communities from developing nations. That's some insanely abusive shit right there.

I mean, I know Izaya and Shizuo hate each other, but damn. That's all kinds of not right. So no. I didn't like it. Denial, lying to Shizuo, considering getting an abortion but changing his mind... all of these would have been acceptable options to you as a writer. But you picked the "if you get an abortion I'll murder you" option.

...Yeah I don't think I'll continue reading this.
secret241 chapter 4 . 2/5
Stupid butt nugget lol great story my. The way
lala chapter 2 . 1/20
Let the poor man abort.
Shit, I dont even know why im even reading mpreg.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/4
this is cute and I love it and I'm taking the spot of the 400th reviewer...
PrussiaEngel chapter 20 . 12/23/2014
D'awwww it's just so cuuute! You did a really good job on this story.
Evilkitten3 chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
Fun Fact: Guys can lactate. Izaya doesn't need breasts. Crazy, huh?
hotxhotguy chapter 20 . 10/1/2014
What I absolutely hate about this chapter is, that a fucking rape victim is getting yelled at. It is disgusting.
chinapregnant chapter 7 . 8/20/2014
chinademonkiller chapter 7 . 7/20/2014
girl and boy
chinademonkiller chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
that's much better
chinademonkiller chapter 4 . 7/20/2014
shizuo that's was not nice
chinademonkiller chapter 3 . 7/20/2014
Chione-chan chapter 12 . 5/4/2014
I'm not saying that I like or dislike OC writers nor am I denying your right to hold your opinion, but isn't calling them scum a bit too much?
Anyway... Ah, the childbirth scene! I always love them for some reason. :) Though, you could work on developing their emotions. I know Shizuo said how he felt but it could have gone further. When I merely watched a video of some woman having a C-section, I felt like my heart was about to jump out of my chest, and then when the child came out, I let out a breath that I didnt realize I was holding and I felt a fuzzy, happy feeling. If I can feel that way during a random birth, I'm sure that Shizuo would experience much more intense emotions during his,child's birth. So, just advice for later birth scenes :D
tedthelionhead chapter 20 . 4/6/2014
This was absolutely amazing! :D
Fumiko15 chapter 20 . 3/26/2014
Ah the ending was great, summing up all the ups and downs of this story ) o
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