Reviews for My Perfect Mr Imperfect
EmmaGoldman chapter 3 . 4/15
Just found this story on twifictionrecs and so far I love it. Jasper seems like a bit of a jerk though like he is toying with Bella's emotions...
nello25 chapter 24 . 4/5
lovely story, i really enjoyed it.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/29
This Bella is getting on my nerves. Seriously.
asam75 chapter 26 . 2/26
So I sit here reading the latter chapters of this story for the nth time. It's my go to story for something to read at bedtime. But this is my favorite chapter. I love Edward's POV, Edward's voice. You've done an excellent job of getting a male voice or perspective, or what I imagine it to be. It's unique from Bella's voice in this story. Congratulations on that and thank you for all the pleasure you have given me.
crazycats7 chapter 26 . 12/28/2013
It was a good story, but I wished that you had them married with kids and the camp opened.
Born in 20th Century chapter 24 . 12/23/2013
Thank you so much for sharing this beautifully brilliant story! I especially liked how each character was representative of a particular aspect and how the entire story reflects life. I sincerely hope that you will write another long story soon, looking forward to reading more of your writing! :)
bella-swan25 chapter 26 . 12/8/2013
I really loved this story! It captured my heart 3 :) Love it
harkie5 chapter 24 . 11/30/2013
Great story! Thank you for sharing.
Rdrgrl chapter 26 . 11/26/2013
I'm glad glad that Bella began to act like an adult. For a while I thought that she and Jasper deserved each other, because they were both so selfish. If she makes Edward (who I liked best, as a a decent person) happy, then I'm I'm glad that they're together. Good for Edward for being more open and honest.
Guest chapter 24 . 11/25/2013
Thank you, thank you for finally having Bella see the light and give her job the heave-ho. I loved that Lizzie and Esme spoke Spanish. Thanks for that touch.
Guest chapter 22 . 11/25/2013
I really can't understand Bella, and how fucking stupid she is! She lets Jasper just get away with more bullshit - driving her to work, reminiscing over coffee. And then she lies to Edward about it? OMG. She's a total hypocrite. I see NO growth or change in her. And she thinks it's okay to maintain a "friendship" with Jasper? And work with him?
Guest chapter 16 . 11/24/2013
So glad someone finally told her how fucking stupid she is. And his leaving her didn't even make her see! She's hanging on Jasper? OMFG.
Rdgrl chapter 7 . 11/23/2013
From the tone of her narration and from her actions, Bella acts like a dippy teenager. She's so immature and unlikeable. I know you've said other readers don't like her. I can see why. She sounds like a bratty 14yr old. Can't imagine what Edward sees in her. I'd also like to kick Jasper's ass. He Jerks her around.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
Going to be honest here. Your version of Bella is unlikeable. OMG. Shallow and judgemental. And I didn't think it was possible to write a Bella more directionless and man-centered than canon. There's post-breakup sad, and then there's pathetic.

Jasper dating his assistant is unprofessional. So the whole thing is dodgy. I'm going to try and stick with you, as we all have limitations and can grow. But I hope she improves and quickly.
rubyblue9696 chapter 15 . 11/21/2013
"We stared at each other for a moment, in our own world of dizzy lust, before he popped open the button of his jeans and slit the zipper down."

...that sentence right there...yeah...my head spun and my vision blurred...love love love it...thank you...

xxx jess
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