Glad Alice didn't came back.
It was a pleasure to read your fiction.
Some times I wanted to slap them all in the face : Edward, Bella, Jasper and Alice, but they are a good depiction of human nature after all.

I seriously hate Alice. She is a nasty bug.

Great story so far.
I really don't like Alice.
I think Bella can't trust her.

Jasper has Bella on layaway.

She sure is snooty. A bitch too.

I'm glad they could have those last months with Elizabeth!
Beautiful chapter

Jasper is a dick! He knows Bella is with Edward and he's sending her roses, mentioning marriage, being romantic.
Bella needs to put a stop to that behavior or she'll have more problems with Edward (and that's pretty much all they've had so far)
Just make up your god-damned mind, Bella!

Edward needed to grovel more, yes, Bella messed up by being in Jasper's apartment, but Edward ended things without letting her explain, ignored her calls for days, she comes up looking for him in his house and there's a woman there in just a bathrobe (Edward got mad because Bella was barefoot in Jasper's place). Then he's an ass at the supermarket while he's yet with another woman and making sure Bella gets the impression that he's with that woman. Weeks passed with no contact whatsoever, he went "looking" for her after hearing about the kiss and ended up punching Jasper and didn't even say a word to Bella. So she had to go to him, again, he barely apologized and just like that they're back together after being such an asshole.
A little self-esteem for Bella would be nice, she lets everyone walk all over her.

Jesus! This story is a rollercoaster! I'm glad Bella worked things out with Jasper and then can be real friends now, and the hate shifted towards Edward now, what an asshole! I know they will end up together because it's a B&E story but I kinda hope they don't, Bella deserves better

If Alice really wanted to mend things with Bella, then she shouldn't be dating Jasper, let alone kissing him. Girl code, specially since they're cousins, you don't do that to family.
Edward is such a sweetheart, and Jasper is an asshole

Damn. Bella is a bit delusional imo.

I think she deserved it. I despise women like her. But then again I am a female Marine so I don't like girly left nut sucking liberals...hahahaha

I still want to smack Bella...but I want to junk punch Jasper too! Lmao

I actually do not like Bella... At all in this. Wow that's a first for me. She is irritating the shut out if me. Lol

Wow she really is snooty bitch hahahaha