Bella seems very snobbish and a bit prudish... Lol

okay but even if Alice did something so wrong to Bella why do i still like her more?

So... Jasper is an manipulative ass...

Poor Edward.

It actually hurts, first Jasper have to shred her heart now Edward

I really really enjoyed this story. Your Alice was probably the most annoying and selfish I’ve ever read and I’m glad she didn’t stick around too long.

I wish that Bella didn’t take Edward back so quickly because what he did was just horrible. He deserved to suffer a bit for that stunt. Plus throwing Irina in her face? Pfft he deserved punishment, not sex. I really felt Bella’s pain in those separation chapters. It was really excellent writing. Overall I love this story.

Cute story! Well done!

loved it!

loved this chap

cute

I hate Alice!

I'm sorry, he's still a dick. Even Bella deserves better than that

Actually, «Me dijo que hablas mucho en jerga» is translated to «She/he told me you speak a lot in slang»

I mean, Alice is right

Ok, so I have to get this off my chest, but I just hate Bella! It's like the only aspects of a personality she has are all negative ones. She presumptuos, pushy, noisy and has no social abilities whatsoever. I honestly don't understand what Edward sees in her, she has nothing to bring to the table, he can do so much better...