This is so good, surprise, surprise, everything you write is good!

Such a good start dani - I loved it.

Bella's voice is clear and strong; she looks like she'll fight for what she wants, which at the moment, is Jasper.

I already love the tension between Edward and Bella. She has taken an immediate dislike to him on appearance alone. And I'm sure she'll find new reasons to dislike him more yet.

So good. Looking forward to the next update. :)

Definitely loving this story already. It's refreshing reading a story where Bella isn't attracted to Edward at first sight. Less cliche that way. And since, at the current moment, she thinks Edward needs a "good shower," he's welcome to use mine. ;)

Anyway, looking forward to reading more. I don't even care when this thing gets updated, so long as it does. :D

Sounds good, haven't been disappointed yet. ;)