|Reviews for True Hearts and Truly Home|
| insatiable06 chapter 15 . 3/19
I have enjoyed your story to this point so far, however the words are throwing me off a bit.
Are a few words that leave me guessing what you mean and it distracts from the story.
| jaspersmate81 chapter 47 . 3/14
Great story! Amazing creative and unique plot. Truly nailed all the characters on the head perfectly. I loved your Jasper and Bella they were so cute. I would have loved to see her as a vampire though and find out how the Hippie Botch took to being a newborn. I think it would have been hilarious to see her bitching out and making demands of Gaius. That would be a priceless reaction to read. I truly hope that you would consider writing a sequel, I'd definitely read it. You left a lot open for their to be more to the story with both Aaron and Aro being the power Hungary bastards that they are. What about Elfin, does she ever go there to rule in the future? What about Hippie Botch escaping.g to come try to snatch the baby, or Aaron doing so? Keep up the excellent work.
| pegasus5406 chapter 47 . 3/13
Wonderful story hon. I enjoyed reading it very much...thanks. bigg huggs. Peggy
| Guest chapter 47 . 2/26
I Just wanted to let you know how much I just loved your story. It was truly different well through out and exciting! Thanks.
| MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 47 . 2/17
Love it :)
| faletoimj chapter 17 . 2/13
I have to admit that I got me teary eyes when I came across that part where Jasper sang a song for Bella and when he proposed to her. I am so in love with this story so far.
| katandjasper chapter 33 . 2/8
This was a very bad chapter for me. You should have said that it was anal sex. For me it's extremely painful and the way it was written made it sound like he would force her if necessary. You should be more clear and I really hope this doesn't happen again.
| Joy98 chapter 47 . 2/7
I love your story. Thanks
| 1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 47 . 2/1
Awesome story, love it
| melanieds chapter 47 . 1/31
| kantorkan chapter 26 . 12/12/2014
Why is it that you have a beta and the grammar is still bad?
| kantorkan chapter 21 . 12/11/2014
it's through,quiet or quite, please get a spelling dictionary if you plan to write more,just a can a sword look famine?don't you mean is parental not prenatal it is bite not also add to the list ,it is barely not barley which is a one more thing it is brass not brace.
| kantorkan chapter 11 . 12/11/2014
You needed a beta,if you had one they should have been fired.
| kantorkan chapter 10 . 12/10/2014
It is through not happened to spell check.
| kantorkan chapter 5 . 12/10/2014