Reviews for Hell Hath No Fury
Serpentinite chapter 11 . 5/29/2013
This is very cool. I've been reading a bunch of your stories, 'cause Ryan is "da bomb". (I just really wanted to say that for some inexplicable reason) Ryan whump, what would we do without it?

This is very interesting, and it's interesting to see various parts from the killer's POV, it's a bit different from your usual style.

The one issue I have is that Natalia was abducted instead of Ryan. If the killer had been watching her and Ryan, he would've seen how shitty Ryan looked - weak as a leaf and like death warmed over - and classify Ryan as the easier target. I don't think he'd go after someone who appears healthy and likely has a gun on her. Just my opinion though. I'm still going to continue reading this.
nochenada chapter 8 . 6/8/2011
i started crackin up at the oh snap and double snap part!i can imagin him just sittin there in the sweat pants and hoodie talkin to the tv!hilarious i luv it!
sassygayowen chapter 8 . 2/23/2011
Hehe I love this chapter!
csifreak1234 chapter 30 . 1/15/2011
That was an amazing story! your a great writer and i cant wait to read your next story!
csifreak1234 chapter 29 . 1/15/2011
yay! alex saved both ryan and Nat! good job alex
csifreak1234 chapter 28 . 1/15/2011
Alex can save ryan...cant she?
csifreak1234 chapter 27 . 1/15/2011
oh ryan, why do you do this to yourself?
csifreak1234 chapter 26 . 1/15/2011
yay! ryan found nat!
csifreak1234 chapter 25 . 1/15/2011
Please dont die nat, please!
csifreak1234 chapter 24 . 1/15/2011
Holy crap Holy crap Holy crap Holy crap Holy crap! Please dont die nat, hold on girl
csifreak1234 chapter 23 . 1/15/2011
Oh God! Dont do it nat! your stronger than him
csifreak1234 chapter 22 . 1/15/2011
Now im worried about nat, thanx for that
csifreak1234 chapter 21 . 1/15/2011
Good job walter!
csifreak1234 chapter 20 . 1/15/2011
Ryan Ryan Ryan. *shaking head* you sometimes need help. everyone does, so swallow your pride and ask for it. Great chapter by the way
csifreak1234 chapter 19 . 1/15/2011
he is a creeper! great story though
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