Reviews for Vacation With The Ely's
HorseCrazyCowgirl1 chapter 8 . 4/9/2015
Wonderful Story
You have to make a new upgrade
Guest chapter 8 . 3/25/2015
You just stopped how does the date go to sam and jake get together.
horse girl528 chapter 8 . 7/4/2014
i love the story and can't wait until the next chapter!
Ur1fan chapter 8 . 9/7/2013
Hi this is me(Emily) can u plz plz plz plz plz review I love ur books!:)
Multifandomgirl2 chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
Oh! my dog does that to! and with the wihining? like "please please please play with me"?
skye chapter 8 . 6/4/2013
LOVE this story! but you need to hurry up and finish it! I cant wait to see what jake does with sam going on this date!
SmokesGurl20 chapter 8 . 3/26/2013
I really Ike this story! Please finish it! :)
Emily chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
Love it!
idk chapter 8 . 9/20/2012
This.Sophisticated.Name chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
I am a serious critical of ones writing. I am sorry if any of this offends you but I feel like it might possibly help you make your story better. Your plot is perfectly fine but your dialogue and descriptions are dreadful. When I started reading it, I couldn't help but feel that everyone sounded like a robot. Not to mention that it is pretty much a script. The first half of the story is dialogue but no speakers, no background, no introduction, nothing. I know you probably think that there isn't a need for
Blah blah blah, Said Jim. or Gosjff? asked Becca. But it is so necessary, especially if you are going for such long dialogue as your beginning does.
Please don't feel like I'm being mean because of this but it makes your story so much less interesting without necessary elements, the basics.
BlowYouAway chapter 8 . 7/3/2012
I actually really like this! I'm curios to see what happens next! Damn Jake must be annoyed!
clh09 chapter 8 . 7/2/2012
Love it! :D Jake is going to be so jealous! :D
Kavazya chapter 8 . 7/2/2012
I loved how Jen managed to still find a way to pressure Sam into a makeover from way back home... Great chapter! Can't wait to read what happens with this Sean guy.
phantom4ever chapter 7 . 9/23/2011
It's really good! Write more please!
phantom4ever chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Very good!:D
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