|Reviews for Empty Words|
| forestrose chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Oh, Alistair. I want to hug him, without armour.
| Nenalata chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Shouldn't have been grinning gleefully at Alistair as I read this, but I was. I'm kind of desensitized to Emo!Alistair fics at this point, even more so when either a Mary Sue/Gary Stu successfully comforts him, or when a gruff Warden manages to do the same. So Lyna's utter failure was a pleasure to read.
I see the beta did wonders-can't find much fault, so I feel lame writing a review without criticism. Way to be.
But along those lines...Greatly improved from the draft you sent me. Ma emma, lethallan! Well done!
| mille libri chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Oh, that was painful to read, but I don't know who I felt most sorry for. You made both Alistair's pain and Lyna's impatience with it seem real and understandable. Nicely done!