Reviews for Beautiful Ending
Guest chapter 20 . 7/4/2012
What a beautiful story. I absaloutly adored it. Nearly cried at the end ]: xx
JustCallMeMrsPaulLahote chapter 20 . 6/25/2012
God i hate you ... I started crying couldn't even see the screen when she flatlined and then she doesn't die, Holy shit your amazing :') hahahahah xx
JustCallMeMrsPaulLahote chapter 17 . 6/25/2012
Why do you feel the need to make me cry ? :'( i love this story
Mariana Lestrange chapter 20 . 11/21/2011
Great story! thanks for writing! i really love your's stories they are addicting and beautiful.
mkpd chapter 20 . 9/27/2010
Awww, that was perfect. Although I didn't feel like Paul got the seriousness of what happened a couple of chapters ago. I mean, his imprint was molested, when she tried to scream for his help she is knocked out. He breaks up with her, throws her out, but then goes back when he finds out her cancer is back, and gets accepted without grovelling? I was hoping we'd hear more about guilt and self-deprication. But it was still good. That last chapter was so sweet!
Holly7795 chapter 20 . 9/27/2010
OMG i loved it (: you are a fantstic writer (: cant wait for the next story (: x
Angel N Darkness chapter 20 . 9/26/2010
awww such a perfect ending... i love this story... you did a great job on it...
Hapsgurl80 chapter 20 . 9/26/2010
that was an awesome ending u made me cry! i loved this story well as well as all your others and can not wait 4 the next!
Guest chapter 20 . 9/26/2010
OHMYFREAKINGAWD.. i honeslty CRIED, I CRIED! when You said it was Kim and Jared's baby, how perfect is that? their Goddaughter? and ANGEL.

Kim is beautiful "she could help save her aunt FOR her uncle"

Im crying.. I need to stop reading cause im scared..


:D :D :D :D :D :D

Angel N Darkness chapter 19 . 9/26/2010
you did a great job on this chapter... i love it... update soon...
Hapsgurl80 chapter 19 . 9/25/2010
happy they made up please update soon
gabycaldemeraz chapter 19 . 9/25/2010
Kim is AWESOME! I love how she is so tiny and shy, but when push comes to shove SHE IS BOSS

"Right where it should have stayed." .. perfection :)

AAAWWW tear!
Hapsgurl80 chapter 18 . 9/24/2010
paul better make it right dang him and jared the jerk! please update soon
Angel N Darkness chapter 18 . 9/24/2010
you did a great job on this chapter... i love it... update soon...
gabycaldemeraz chapter 18 . 9/24/2010
Boo, my 2 sad puppies :(.

NO! No no no No! Poor Toni!.. Its ok, its ok, Im jus gonna concentrate on the title of the story... I CANT! Poor toni! :(

DAMN! BRADY MY HERO! boy he sure knows how to get his point across... What a great bro :)..:(...

JARED! OMfreakingG drool...

Uuuugggh! Those boys better make up for it.

Ps. I forgot to mention that i really appreciate jared going al ''bros before wh.. Imprint'' he had Paul back all the way (of course Paul believed he was right). That gave him character... thank u :). I think it would've been worse for Paul had he not been with his best friend... What's that? What does 'this pure imagination' mean? I dont understand 'not real'... Oh well.. :p lol
87 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »