Reviews for In Step
Catmint chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Sweet, emotional and beautiful. Excellent writing.
sopmire chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Oh my gosh, this is so sweet! So possible, and very in character. Brought a tear to my eye too!

Thanks for writing/sharing it!
Moo Marie chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I'm not sure what I was expecting, but it wasn't that. Very nice. Very romantic. sniff
Nicoya456 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
good story
Betherzz chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
cute little story :) tony wont be the first man to say or do the wrong thing when the wife tells him shes pregnant and make her cry or be upset... the first pregnancy, my husband, was 1000 miles away, and i didnt want to call and tell him, so i waited for the first weekend we had together in person, which was 4 months later LOL well he had a complete melt down in the middle of the airport and left me there... he wasnt pissed i was pregnant, he was pissed i waited to tell him, he would have insisted i come home and finish closer to home rather than across the country... sadly 3 months later he was killed on the job... my 2nd husband had his mini freak out in the middle of olive garden (he knew it was bound to happen sooner or later, we had been seeing a fertility specialist for 3 years) that time i left him sitting at the table and went home... the next freak out came 8 years later in the middle of a dinner with his partners and some of their clients, black tie kinda deal, and someone was giving a speach and it hit him what i had said at breakfast, he totally wigged out big time! LOL (we had given up with fertility treatments a few months before and we didnt think anything of it when i had gotten sick the week before all this, but i had been to the doc the day before and gotten the call right before we had breakfast that morning) anyway he started screaming at me about stuff i had been doing the last few months that are a no no when pregnant while being high risk...painting, rearranging the living room furniture, running, doing the heavy lifting of the 2 older kids, he was going on and on and one of his partners finally said hey man, whats the problem over there? your wife finally got pregnant again, why are you so creased about it? he replied with shes fucking pregnant man and doing bad things for pregnant women that have a tendency to miscarry before 10 weeks, then he was like omg you are pregnant again? lol like it hit him like a ton of bricks and realization set in rofl, men can be idiots and you wanna slap the shit outta them for not saying or doing or reacting like we think they should... we had time for our news to hit us, they need theirs too, we never remember that part, only the part where we get pissed... lol its a cute story thanks for the great read
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
This is a very touching story.

And you may well have hit on one of Tony's basic insecurities and why he runs from commitment.

Good job!
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Awww! I'm not usually one for future-Tiva fics, but this was was pretty Tony-centric, and I really enjoyed it! Very realistic as far as emotions go, and wonderful imagery. Great work! :)
marshmeg chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
great drabble, i liked it:)
vanishingp2000 chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Very nicely done. I loved the touch with the glasses, thanks, VP.
CSI4lyfNCIS13 chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
That was one of the sweetest things i have ever read. Great work.
diana teo chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
You had me at 'my wife'...sniff...

Beautifully written,a gem.
fanoftiva chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
This is so sweet and intospective at the same time. I liked it very much.
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
This was very sweet. It made me tear up. Nice job