Reviews for To Be Human
Ferdinand Sutcliff chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Wow. You are an epic amazing writer.

it fits together really well.

wow :D
adamsfamily chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I found this so heartbreaking and well done. How Darken is slowly discovering the deeply buried parts of himself that long to be valued and loved; how he is trying to express love himself. When his tentative gesture is repelled, it only reinforces his deep sense that he will never be worthy of being loved.

I have to admit this is one scenario where I really do not like Kahlan. Nicholas is just as much a part of Darken as he is of Kahlan, but the only time Kahlan acknowledges Darken's part of Nicholas is when she concludes Nicholas is evil. She is so cruel here. She cannot even bring herself to let him share one moment with his son.
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
That was...depressing. I liked it, though!

I think it was nice how you mentioned Jennsen!
LeeLooDallas chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
the greatest pain of all was to be human - poor Darken! great story!