Reviews for The Lost Twin
Charlie0925 chapter 2 . 5/2/2016
Aww, I love how close they are! Brilliant writing here honey, I just wish that there was more as I would love to see what happens next and how Dumbles is reacting to everything! ;o)
Ranmaleopard chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
awesome please continue!
Please Read my stuff chapter 2 . 9/7/2012
lovw it
Akuma-Heika chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
Blacksword Zero chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
Interesting,please update.
Rori Potter chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
That was brilliant. Update soon.
Epic Hero Laugh chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
really really good. please continue. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. :D
kyjori chapter 2 . 7/25/2011
Wow... Amazing beginning to your story. I love how paranoid Lily is and how it has affected both their lives. Harry's dedication to his mom is admirable and I am glad you made him intelligent rather than the dunderhead he is in canon.

I am anticipating future chapters, I hope you have not abandoned this piece of work. I don't see Harry being dragged back to Hogwarts for the triwizard tournament because he will be too young. The major conflict I anticipate is Lily being found by someone in Paris. You can go the route of "Mother Dearest", a Bellatrix/Harry Potter parental story where Bella sacrafices herself in order to keep Harry an unknown figure...

Penny is wise chapter 2 . 5/30/2011
Awesome story I hope you keep it going.
raka chapter 2 . 4/26/2011
hmm... nice start...

Hope you actually write the story though... This just seems like a little muse you had which will pass on... :)
Rebirthed King chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
Good start.

Will this be a fic where he is dragged back to Hogwarts or will it be something else with a twist?

Will Harry be friends with Fleur? Are the people that he is friends with play an important role on this story?

Does Dumbledore know that they are alive and hiding or has he presumed they have left the magical world?

Keep up the good work

P.b King

Can't wait for the next chapter
Naginator chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
Hmm very nice look forward to more, will this be incest?
TxA-GunFighter chapter 2 . 2/27/2011
Very good chapter, can't wait to read more.

TxA-GunFighter chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Very good start.

ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
Lovin it. keep going. I bet you'll surprise use with Dan being alive or something and the twins competing in Triwizard tornament. I could be wrong but I'd probably do that...
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