|Reviews for Pirouettes and Cigarettes|
| bbb136 chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Excuse me why is there no second chapter for this?
;) Oh and your pms are disabled (again.. I'm starting to think that you don't love me, :sniff:) so I'll just tell you in this review. I'm currently in the middle of my art GCSE (art is always done like a month earlier for some reason) so I don't have any real time to finish chapter 17... but when it's done I WILL SEND IT TO YOU. HAVE NO WORRIES FELLOW SLASHER!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Awesome! Can't wait till the next one
| stardust-bones chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Hey! I'm really liking what you've got so far. You've set yourelf up for what is promsising to be an amazing story.
Roxas sounds really adorable when he's dancing.
Just one thing- your sentence structure is a bit awkward. It uses far too many run-ons for my taste. Using more periods instead of commas would make for an easier read in future chapters.
Can't wait to read more!