Hi! Let me say that chapter was amazing! I was reading and forgot that I was reading a fanfic. It was so good, that I thought it was a real book! I swear Im not lying. The situation and wording was just right. So please do NOT change anthing. It had a nice and relaxed feel that was still fast paced and exciting which is great!

I was screaming at my computer screen when I read the part about Chloe and the bat and the bathroom situation. I hate it when people make a fool out of themselves so it was agonizing! I loved every second of it though! It was so funny and just wow!

I know you said your friend was okay, but Im still going to say I hope she gets/feels better! It know damn well that bruises hurt! I also just Want to let you know that Im extremly jealous that you have a friend like that! I just might have to steal her from you...

Im so exicted about next chapter so please please please update soon! ;)

Well, I'm thrilled with this chapter; though I unapologetically hate Mila. However, I'm excited for the next chapter. I can just imagine something going wrong and Derek having to save the day, almost by instinct, because he could never let anything happen to Chloe. But, what I'm most curious about, is why Derek confided in Mila? Did he throw Chloe across the room in one of their more tense fights? And what about Chlerek? Is Chloe going to confront Derek, call him out on his hypocritical behaviour? Update ASAP :) Again, awesome chapter

I have no idea how you managed to upload such along chapter so quickly... it just blows my mind O_o

I hope your friend's bruise heals well! I'm sure car accidents are no fun. None of my friends help me plot *sniffle*.

I'm pretty sure I started cracking up when I read "Take them out while they're naked and defenseless." Poor Chloe. I feel horrible for laughing, but that's probably one of the most awkward things ever.

Thank you so so SO much for spelling out the word "you" in Tori's text. God bless your soul.

Mila's... annoying. Maybe I'm just biased, but what she said to Derek was quite mean. That's not to say he's never a jerk, but it's different! And of course, there's the issue of her getting in the way of Chlerek -.-

But there's still hope! Thank God, or I'd probably cry.

And funny, the only thing I like on my hot dogs is ketchup XD But I'm from Maryland, we're obsessed with crabs.

Hm. I'm thinking one of the sappier chapters is probably going to be "My Heart", and maybe the one right before they get together would be "Crushcrushcrush". But other than that, I really don't have a clue! Oh yeah, and I'm pretty sure "Misery Business" will be in there somewhere with the whole Mila thing. And I dunno, but for some reason I could see "Turn It Off" worked in someplace, but that could just be because that's one of my favorite songs ever. *shrugs*

Do I even need to demand an update? Just in case: Please update!

ahahah really good, derek would be so jelous and pisses if she really flirted with this guy, that could lead to some seirous confestions of love ahahahah oh and chloe has gotta look HAWT in that dress xx

Very good, though I'm practically foaming at the mouth to find out what's going to happen. I swear, if Mila doesn't get hers I'm going to break something here. Quite possibly the computer...Then how would I find out if Derek and Chloe get together?

Please hurry on that next chapter, my computer's life might depend on it!

Oh and, your story's awesome. _

PLEASE THEY NEED TO GET TOGETHER SOON! PLEASE!

LOL. Love this story, but it makes me cry because Derek and Chloe hate each other.

Xoxo.

Autumn.

so i finally decided to review ( im her bestie who helps her work through her plot holes and editing issues.) and i have to say i dont mind my job. i love this story and want her to finish and put the next chapters in my inbox. :) love ya chrissy. cant wait til u finish this. lol.

Awwwwww! Derek might have a girly friend! Well screw her! Chloe's better! See now I need MORE you can't just leave me hanging! Arggg this is going to really annoy me! So for the sake of my sanity PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I really, really like this. I'm not sure how much I like the thought of some little skank kissing Derek, but I like this story. Please update soon- I can only review when I'm at school and I enjoy reviewing for people. Reviews make me happy, so they must make other people happy as well!

Hey again, good chapter...agian. :) I love the cliffy-though most people don't like them. Derek is still in character, thank Ggoodness for that. I love this story so, just don't want Derek to leave so soon! Haha. keep up the awesome work. I really hope to read the rest of this wonderful story. :)

By Saturday, I hope you mean this Saturday... PLEASE. So, this succeeded in alleviating my fix until halfway through I was like, "Hey, this awesome author usually leaves us with something to think about, so I'm going to finish this chapter wanting another to magically appear." Loved the chapter l-o-v-e-d it. I especially enjoyed the part where Derek started playing nice and Chloe turned the game around and the part in the gas station where they were about to get somewhere before Simon interrupted (! !) Though, I have one problem: I really want to know who the bee was who he kissed on the cheek-please say a long lost cousin.

B-but why? Why? I don't understand WHY? That's the question! (really, really good by the way. I'm hooked. reading in school when I shouldn't be!)

Road trip and two exes dealing with each other equals super great story thought it does have an sprinkle of National Lampoon.

Well, when I find a fanfic I like, I try to make it a habit of reviewing every chapter. Whenever I see someone that reviews every chapter of mine, it makes me feel all fuzzy because it lets me know that every chapter is WORTH something, you know? Probably not. Ah, well.

I love Simon's little "PMS" comment. He wouldn't be laughing if only he understood -.- Even though Chloe didn't really have PMS, but still!

I also like Chloe's somewhat awkward rambling. You know, sometimes I forget how much I love her dearly XD

*Sniffles* At least Derek's being nice, even though he does have an "ulterior motive".

You do a really good job of balancing out who to feel sorry for. Sometimes I feel worse for Chloe, other times for Derek, and that's pretty difficult to do. You somehow managed to keep my love of BOTH characters.

Of course Derek has a girlfriend. Of course he does... Right when Chloe's finally accepting that she's not over him.

Gah. The suspense is too much! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I came across your story a couple nights ago, and I will not lie, I love it! I love the way you write and I love how everything flows easily.

I'm so scared that you made Derek have, a girlfriend/crush thing/love interest. Please tell me you didn't, I don't think I'd be able to bare it. And just a question, do you plan on finishing this stoy with a sad note, because if you do a heads up would be great. (I hate crying) Though, hapyy endings are encouraged!