I hate derek in this story...shud not be under clerek cuz derek is mean.

Wow. I never knew I would like a fic so much that focused on Chloe and Derek not working as a couple. Presently. May you unite them together later on in your story. But serious. I am in love with your writing. My heart fell into my stomach when I was reading of how panicked Chloe felt when Derek used to draw blood from her. And I was on the edge of my chair when Chloe was expressing all their pent up feelings. I hated that they were at with each other, but at same time I loved reading every word of it. Great writing. Please, please update soon. :D

SO GREAT! i absolutely loved it and i am on the dge of my seat waiting for you to conitnue posting!

oh goodness your story is amazing and veryyy well written! i love the thought you put into it, and i cant WAIT to see whats going to happen! )

Beautiful. Please update soon.

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Fuck!

This will be interesting.

Who is the girl he kissed? What are they staying at her house?

This was awsome! I LOVED it, I did not expect the plot twist. But I can't really see Derek changeing so much. So was is derek going to find her and explain what he did. Also can something really bad happen to Mila, like maybe derek ditching her or she gets run over by a truck (still don't like her). Please update soon.

This was awsome! I LOVED it, I did not expect the plot twist. But I can't really see Derek changeing so much. So was is derek going to find her and explain what he did. Also can something really bad happen to Mila, like maybe derek ditching her or she gets run over by a truck (still don't like her). Please update soon.

:):):):):):P

You have me sitting on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for the next chapter.

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i loved it, keep going