There again is the dreaded cliffhanger. You CAN'T leave me hanging here.

I love it so far.

These chapters keep getting better... I don't know how you do it!

Please update soon!

I think it was pretty horrible for Derek to give Mila that perfume... unless she was lying? with her i wouldn't be surprised. -ugh sigh-

You need to update like right now because I'm addicted to this story *pretty please with a cheery on top thanksss:)*

this is still the same person as before, sorry but i forgot to put this in my other review. If derek is going to change in that forest, maybe chloe coild help him like before and maybe that could ease some of the tension. Also I think derek should suffer more too, I don't think it's fair that chloe is the only one suffering. OH and maybe in the next chapter they could ditch Mila. Sorry but i just really don't like her, in my opinion she is a bigger b..ch then Tori. Please update soon

The song choice was really great for this chapter. And I promise I'm not just saying that because it's one of my favorites by Paramore :P

It's nice that they're making progress, but at a slow pace. I feel like the speed they're moving at is very realistic, something I applaud.

Mila is so... annoying. I don't know if that's because I'm biased or because Chloe's biased or if I'm jealous because I love Derek and think Chloe is the only one who's allowed to be in any sort of romantic relationship with him, but it's true. I have decided that right now, I really don't like her. Guess I'm really that petty XD

Putting in flashbacks is a really good idea - that was you give us all our fix of Chlerek while still keeping up with the tension in the present.

I can't decide if Derek's a jerk for buy Mila Chloe's perfume or if it's really sweet...

Oh boy. Here comes the talking/yelling/possibly kissing *cough cough hint hint*.

Halloween oneshot idea that I was going to write but am to lazy to: something about a Halloween party, with Chloe going as Little Red Riding Hood and Derek as her Big Bad Wolf (in honor of the quote by Royce in The Reckoning).

See, I was going to do NaNoWriMo, but I was thinking, what if I actually wanted to get published? Wouldn't wanna waste my good ideas now, haha.

Anyway, good chapter over all!

Hey great job. Can't wait for more. POST SOON PLEASE!

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh, you really need to update. It's is amazing, no lie, but I wanna punch mila im the face, other that it's amazing and you should update reallllly reallly soon.

Rockin story! Just read the whole thing, it took me like an hour and a half, and it was so worth it! Post Chapter 8 Now! Please?

Love it! Best Chlerek up here in a while. update!

That perfume thing was soo low of Derek. I love this story! Please post the next chapter up, like today!

Holy Crap! I love this story! Please, oh pretty please update soon!

LOOOOOVE IT! i love how u dont write short chapters but nice long ass ones soo that im satisfied until the next chapter! plus its amazing how u keep the characters...in character! dude there is something seriously ODD bout mila (hmmm Que in the curiosity robot!) , maybe shes actually a psychotic who escaped from a mental institude! what i can hope ryt? RYT? LOLNESS! keep up the awesomtasticaly work...! if that makes any sense ."

Wow. Seriously awesome story. Update soon. please? I need me some more Derek. :)

Oh, this has to be one of your best chapter yet. I loved it. I love the UST and angst going on, and there's something fishy about that Mila.

Once aghain, love it. Credit to your writing talent.

Awww he's still so obsessed with Chloe, it's so sweet and heart breaking at the same time.

Also Halloween is my favourute holiday and Halloween themed one-shots sounds good to me.

Just so you know this is the same jaimee as before, I use the same name to rewiew. Anyways I loved this chapter. In the next chapter could Derek and Chloe have a NICE talk and just make up all ready because they oviosly still love each other. By the way I have a question about Mila, did she make up the girlfriend thing ot is it real, because when chloe mentioned it to derek he seemed surprised. Also was she the one to give away chloe's name at the bar? UNG so many qouestions. Please update soon or I'll die of suspense.