Heehee me likely. Sigh, but I still want Chloe to cause Derek more emotional pain, he,s not suffering enough damnit! / I love the little flashbacks and Mila is really not getting on my nerves, Derek is. Lovely chapter overall. Can't wait for next Saturday!

That was wrong of him to give Mila Chloe's perfume but I can undrstand it, it shows he loves Chloe and can't get over her. He's trying to make Mila Chloe but she'll never be Chloe! I can't wait for the next chapter,this is what they need to have it out and get back on track because I don't think it's a case of Chloe not being able to stand him, she just can't stand to be around him when she's still in love with him but they're not together any more and he's with someone else, it's the boost she needs to tell him how she feels and bring them back together cause I think it's the same with him and the sooner the two of them are back together again, the happier they'll be and the more balanced because they are completely out of sync without each other, they keep each other balanced and they don't work right apart! Please let them get back together soon and don't let Chloe get on the plane to LA, send Mila away instead! Thanks for the cyber cookies, they were tasty! Update soon!

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First off, I can't believe you left us hanging like that! Why oh why would you torture your devoted fans in such a cruel way? :p That one objection aside, I thought this chapter was Amazing, maybe my favorite. I thought the flashbacks were so sweet and so well-placed and that they really added to the overall bittersweet tone of this chapter. You're creating a very intricate and well thought out story. Though, I'm wondering what will happen next? Will they leave Mila on the side of the road (which I'd totally support 100%)? Will the lack of sleep and stress of driving and pent up tension drive Derek over the edge, causing an unwanted and unexpected change, leaving Chloe the only one who can be there for him? I, for one, am dying to know. Update asap :)

Awww, I felt for Chloe when I was reading this chapter. It's kinda sad reading about how she pines for Derek, but at the same time, can't stand him. And Mila just downright bothered me.

And my pen names is little snips of my name, McC is part of my last name, Bri part of my first name, and Cider my middle name. (:

ok i feel guilty for not helping w/ this it turned out good! i like that ending better then the one you sent. :) ill help w/ chpt !

uhmmm I'm addicted to this story though for some reason I was a little confused reading this chapter for some reason?

please update soon!:)

I love this story. My favorite chapter is Thats What You Get. Not only that is the song I'm best at in rock band, best chapter so far in my head I LUV THIS STORY

Violentious

If Derek and Chloe don't get over themselves and realize they love each other, imma jump into the computer and bang their heads together. Like seriously, YOU GUYS ARE PERFECT FOR EACH OTHER! ..are we ever gonna find out why they broke up? why would Chloe through a pillow at a lamp? Oooh, violent, doesn't seem like Chloe at all! I'm joking. About the lamp part. And about the jumping into the computer part, too, since I can't actually do that..

Great story BTW!

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I love this story so far. I like how you made chloe jelous. I HATE mila right now she seems to want to get between chloe and derek all the time. Please tell me chloe and derek end up together soon or at least by the end of the story because if they don.t i am going to be really sad. Please update soon!

loved it ! and that red guy makes me want to slap him!

A jealous Chloe! I love it! So it was her fault she and Derek broke up! What did she do and say that was 'too far' and made him leave? It must have been pretty awful to finally drive him off. So he and Mila have only been together a very short time, just as he's starting to move on, Simon and Tori force him and Chloe into close quarters. I think that now there are three people huring cause I don't think Derek is as over Chloe as he thought he was either and I think he's still hurting from whatever she did. I wonder if Simon even knows why they broke up, he seems to be putting all the blame on Derek which isn't very fair so I'm assuming he doesn't know. It is going to be very arkward with Chloe, Derek and Mila in the one car, espeacially if Chloe succeeds in breaking Mila and Derek up! I wish Chloe and Derek would just make up though! I think they need to clear the air with a big argument about the night that led to Derek leaving, get their feelings out so they have a starting point for sorting everything out and getting back together. Obviously Derek can't be himself with Mila like he was with Chloe if he's changing who he is around Mila, probably afraid that if he's himself he'll get hurt agan like with Chloe. Update soon!

your story is awesome, can't wait for the next chapter. I hope we find out if Derek really is together with Mila. ( I sincerely hope not, i kind of don't like her!) x

You updates :D Honestly, one of the highlights of my night. I really love the way you write, you manage to keep everyone perfectly in character while putting your own little spin on them. Loved this chapter and loved when Derek got all protective and came stopping to the bar because the guy roofied her drink. Hmmm, I still don't like Mila; her sole purpose in life seems to be to one up Chloe and throw herself at Derek, the skank :p Anywho, update again soon :)

I'm the same Anonymous; I don't feel like signing up or thinking of a name right now.

I agree, Born For This works. :)

I liked having a bit of insight into Chloe and Derek's past. I was wondering what had happened to them.

From this chapter, I'm starting to think that Mila and Grant have had a little "history", you know what I mean? :D

But, that is just my opinion.

This chapter was great, as usual. Can't wait till next chapter; gonna be a lot of tension.

Good luck, and I didn't say this last time, but I hope you're friend is okay!:)