Reviews for Misguided Ghosts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ooohhhh! Here comes drama, I can feel. Derek, Chloe and Mila in a small car for maybe hours at a time? Yes, all hell will break lose, in the form of snippy little comments with Derek playing tug-a-war in between two possive girls. Can't wait to see what you do ! Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny, I've actually rediscovered my love of "Born For This" over the past few weeks XD Man, I'm slow. It took me FOREVER to process the first segment and I still don't know if I got it right. Definitely don't like Mila -.- Definitely not... Ah, Chloe. I know how she feels about walking in heels - they truly are death traps for clumsy people like me. Derek was sweet in the last section. And I'm very glad Simon told Mila to shut the hell up. I read a book, Perfect Chemistry, in one sitting today. Just thought I should let you know that this romance is way, WAY better :) Glad to hear your friend is doing well! |
![]() ![]() seriously, this story breaks my heart. it's a good story. Chloe deserve so much better than Derek right now. it's unfair how he seem to purposely hurt her, both him and Milla. If i were Chloe i would be sitting in a corner trying to make myself as small and invisible as possible, trying my best to not let the tears shed as i feel the sting of my broken heart. and thanks for the shout out ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D Loved it! Can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far! Great work! |
![]() ![]() this story is sooooo good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Chloe! I wanted to cry when I read Derek was with that silly cow Mila! He needs to be with Chloe, though the way she's been treating him this trip I'm not surprised he want's her gone! So is something bad gonna happen to Chloe to put them back together? Can I just say Simon and Tori are very cruel if they both knew about Mila and let Chloe find out about her the way she did! Update soon I can't wait to read the next chapter, this is such a great story! I just want Derek and Chloe back together and I laughedso much at the shower scene! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I genuinely love this. Good job. Cliffhangers. :D Gotta love/loathe them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am a dork and clicked the wrong chapter to review. My previous review was actually for chapter 5. -.-' Sorry. So, heres the review again: 'I loved this chapter! You seriously have wicked writing skills,my friend. You make your reader in tune with the main character and make them feel the emotions that Chloe feels. Call me a sadist, but I seriously want Chloe to do something that would hurt Derek, emotionally of course (the best way heehee)and give him a dose of his own medicine. Perhaps get a new guy to set him off? Or maybe she would get hurt and doesn't want Derek's help in any shape or form. Oh the possibilites are endless. Lovely story, very nice :)' Yes, I tend to be in my own wold at times lol. But in my defence, it does help give me new ideas for my stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know, at first I just completely ignored this story but then I was like, "You know, people give my stories a chanceso why shouldn't I do the same." So I read you're story and I loved it! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() If she looks sexy and that guy gets hansy won't Derek be pissed and won't that cause issues with him and the other b*tch. What's the deal with her anyway? I love this story and your writing by the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter! You seriously have wicked writing skills,my friend. You make your reader in tune with the main character and make them feel the emotions that Chloe feels. Call me a sadist, but I seriously want Chloe to do something that would hurt Derek, emotionally of course (the best way heehee)and give him a dose of his own medicine. Perhaps get a new guy to set him off? Or maybe she would get hurt and doesn't want Derek's help in any shape or form. Oh the possibilites are endless. Lovely story, very nice :) |
![]() ![]() I love this story, it's one of the only ones on fanfiction worth reading. please continue soon!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it strange that I feel jealous of Mila for Chloe? Because that's what I was feeling when reading Derek and Mila interact along with annoyed, mad and really sad. But anyway it was a great chapter and you unraveled Chloe's emotions well. Plus you used one of my favourite songs in life. Paramore rocks! |
![]() ![]() I don't have a FF account, but I've been reading stories on here and looking up people like a major stalker. And out of all of the people I have stalked, I have to say that you are my favorite to stalk... if that doesn't sound too creepy. xD Basically, I am saying that you are my favorite "author" on here. "Misguided Ghosts" is so realistic and so entertaining that I constantly find myself wanting more. You do an amazing job. The story first caught my eye because of the title. I'm a HUGE and OBSESSED fan of Paramore so I didn't think it was a coincidence. And after finding out that you were using their songs, I started reading. And although Paramore is what got me started on your story, since I've started reading, the plot was what kept me continuing. The Darkest Powers is my favorite series and Paramore is my favorite band, so it just HAD to have added up to be a great story. But, your writing ability just makes it ten times better. In fact, your writing skills is what keeps me hooked. Anyways, I have a feeling that you are going to use Misery Business real soon. And possibly Feeling Sorry if Derek does something regrettable, which I feel like he might. :) I also have a strong feeling that my Heart will be used, also. :) P.S. I have not commented on your story before, although I've been reading it since Chapter 1. |