|Reviews for Kuma's Victory|
| MasterQwertster chapter 1 . 6/21
This is good. I find your reasoning on the islands very much acceptable and find the idea of a paradise penal colony somewhat amusing (it's a small wonder the inhabitants didn't turn it into a death battle royal). Good job!
| JenEvan chapter 1 . 3/14
Nice, despite being a bit of a sad victory. The Straw Hats did return, even stronger that ever, but Kuma was no longer in his conscious mind to know and enjoy his success.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
Great fic. Keep writing.
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
Like how you do Kuma's assessments of the crew. I was personally dismissive of the idea that Kuma knew precisely where to put them like that to help them get stronger, particularly because Franky and Robin nearly died from exposure from the start, and Usopp from the fauna, but you made good arguments here that are believable
Good take on Mihawk
| Son of Whitebeard chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
haha kuma the softy so fun
| DeGamer422 chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Kumas laughing on the inside
| tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
its nice and sad.
| Hyde4222 chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
OMG! honestly? i think that exactly what happened! :D i was ganna do something like this but now i cant :( another reason to love kuma isnt it?
| La Snooze chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
So. I have to say, shit. That was awesome, and now I almost lost my courage to end my own fanfic about the timeskip- background. I’d love it if you’d read it when I upload it, and if there’s anything that’s in your story too, then hit me, please. Joke is joke, but that’s a review, no ?
I love it how you pictured the whole incident and Kuma’s thoughts about it. Although no one really knows much about Kuma (besides our beloved Oda-sensei...) to say his character is like this or that, but I really think your conclusion fits. I love the two sided Kuma, and can really imagine him as a big softy xD.
As for points I didn’t like, Heres my list:
Although, one thing kind of bothered me. But it’s just a tiny detail. So if you don’t care, just don’t read what I write now...: Kuma looks at the strawhats through his mecha eyes where he can see the name, the bounty and abilities. So far, nice job. But I’m wondering if he sees things beside that too, like, as you wrote for Sanji’s abilities “cook” and for chopper “doctor” I don’t know if I can believe that he can see that too. Well but. as I said. Tiny detail. My ranting
Congratz on the story, you did a great job.
| XXCaptainUsoppXX chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
This was lovely, and probably very accurate. Made me sad, too... Poor Kuma... *cry*
(Though as a little side note, Usopp's bounty is 30,000,000 not 18,000,000...)
| Cyspark01 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I wonder if Kuma gets to met with Garp, Coby and Helmeppo. That would be something, considering that Coby wants to be an Admiral.
| Elita One chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
cant wait to see the results after their 2 years of training