|Reviews for Release|
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/6
Idk if I missed it or forgot but did Edward ever properly explain Tanya following him to the meadow, him being pissed and wasted, and why he was getting a bk and if he stopped her or continued. Great story I'm wondering what Edward will do now though. Being in jail for fraud will make people not trust him in business
| Purple Pulse chapter 17 . 6/25
Wow, that was intense. Incredible writing, and unique plot - I loved it!
| Snappher chapter 1 . 4/27
So not vamps? Edward needs his balls kicked repeatedly for taking her virginity and cutting her loose the same day. Just about the same thing happened to me...man, that fucked me up for years. It's been 20 years now, and it's had lingering effects. Men suck. lol
| sue1zide chapter 17 . 8/24/2017
Thank you for a very well written story.
| sue1zide chapter 1 . 8/22/2017
This is different from anything I've read. Interesting.
| Trina chapter 5 . 8/6/2017
Lol. This story is hilarious! First, Alice is an idiot; she didn't have to ditch Bella, Edward didn't hold a gun to her head, so she needs to stop being a little Bitch. Second, how pathetic is Bella? Pathetic. My lover supposedly used me and cheated on his girlfriend w me, let me go get beat and withhold my orgasms bc that makes it better! Yes! Seriously, this story is embarrassing. Nothing like trying out some bdsm bc what's her face made a fanfiction about it. You're embarrassing. Just saying
| Jaygm chapter 16 . 7/11/2017
I can't believe that Eleazar chickened the hell out. I sure hope he didn't leave the rest of them- especially Edward- holding the weight for the whole scheme.
| Jaygm chapter 15 . 7/11/2017
What a freaking coward! At least Bernie hung on to face the music. . .
| Jaygm chapter 14 . 7/11/2017
You did a fine job on the comparison to Madoff. There was just a movie out on Bernie and Eleazar did the same. I sure hope they figure out a way to catch Eleazar to bring him to justice and Edward gets off the hook.
| Jaygm chapter 8 . 7/11/2017
Bella is so messed up. Edward needed to see her like that. Eleazar is a Bernie Madoff. These folks could be in big trouble.
| Jaygm chapter 7 . 7/11/2017
What an effed up circus of people, huh? That was craziness.
| Jaygm chapter 6 . 7/11/2017
The most heartbreaking letters ever. Those two assholes devastated poor Bella.
| sunfleur chapter 3 . 6/16/2017
dude... this is going to be my weekend's guilty pleasure...!
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 2 . 5/11/2017
Are Edward and Alice vampires? Why would Edward need to protect Bella from Eleazar?
Ten years is a long time to be apart. Why hasn't Edward gone after Bella? Did he pull a New Moon on her?
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
Your writing is wonderful. I have been putting off reading this story for years and finally decided to delve in.
Something is not adding up with Edward making love to Bellla and then just kissing another woman in front of her and unceremoniously dumping her.
I don't usually read Jacob/Bella pairings but I will give it a shot. See how far I get. Lol