Reviews for Broken Aurora |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Irina -laurent kate- garret Tanya -unknown and 1000 years old |
![]() ![]() This fic is a treasure. I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() 5:53 am I just woke up and I'm already seething with hate. Thank you author! |
![]() ![]() ![]() um... why is bella kissing everyone... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stopped to take a break from reading this but why is Cynthia a person again |
![]() ![]() ![]() so she's quicksilver |
![]() ![]() ![]() she a freak in the sheets |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella just proved my point of vamps being over protective and possessive Alice got touched and Bella wanted to kill the guy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I doubt that all the mates would let Bella kiss their mates the vampires in the twilight universe are to possessive and it kinda pisses me off that they let it slide |
![]() ![]() ![]() she smelt her hand I'm dead lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() completely difference in attitudes from blood solstice, |
![]() ![]() ![]() ultra instinct? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Their decision to let James live makes no sense to me. They are so blasé about killing most of the time, but when people actually threaten them they let it go. Any enemy could be exploited and used by vampires to target them. For there to be members in their coven with war and battle experience, I’m surprised they would make this decision. They should’ve killed James in my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m liking the story so far and the slow build isn’t a problem it just makes it all the sweeter when they finally do get together, a story I read recently did that and it was all the more satisfying when it finally happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() weren't the Denali much older? like, Tanya almost a whole millenia? is there a specific reason you made them younger? what about the succubus legends? and why does everyone keep talking about mates? the fact that it seems so incredibly important in this story makes it feel like the usually strong familial bonds in the Cullens and especially the Denali sisters are much less powerful, which saddens me. I guess I'm not a fan of the sisters all having mates, I always thought the three of them had a connection that was similar enough that guy were happy with that. I get that you wanted to bring up the topic of mates for vampires, since they can be very important, but I think it would have been enough to just let Bella notice the mating bonds around her without pressure to find one of her own directly from her family. seeing the others and feeling lonely would have been enough in my opinion. but I'm curious how this continues. oh, and I'm still hung up on the age thing, how old is everyone? |