Reviews for One Hour
mahnoor chapter 1 . 1/21/2013

i seriously wish that they could put this part in the real dbz story ... I fits perfectly :)
Lil'T chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Cute and funny stuff you got going on here. Both Trunks and Future Trunks are my fave characters in the series; I like how you did this fic as a fill-in scene that took place after Vegeta sparred with Trunks in the anime. If I didn't have trouble logging in, I'd mark this as a fave - great job! :)
TuckingFypo chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Oh my god, that was hilarious!

"Yes, well, I really want to destroy this planet when your mother pisses me off. We don't always get what we want,"

Especially THIS: "She handles our... baby finances..."
xDDD I ROFL'D at that! A part of me wants a sequel where Trunks is asking Bulma for a brother!
jessi chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Great story, very nice!
Starcrossedlover12 chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Omg this was just too hilarious! No seriously, you have real talent with your Vegeta stories! *O* Just too good xxx
silvia S.K chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
"She handles our... baby finances..." Hahahah favorite part!

Always a good fic when vegeta is playing the father. I love their father-son relationship!
Mrs V. Briefs chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Cute father-son-bonding fic and vegeta wasnt at all out of character. Nice one
CherryPie13 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Adorable! So cute! I especially loved the ice-cream and the conversation after! (I think that these Trunks/Vegeta interactions are really cute. I'm going to read more of these...)
lori9000 chapter 1 . 5/8/2012

Seriously the cutest thing I've ever read ;_; 3
TemptingDrug chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
All I have to say is this "Baby finances."
dragonball girl23 chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
smalsa chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
That was just amazing and both in character too, I wanted to read more your writing is flawless! I was laughing my head off the whole time I was reading I want to find more fics like this to read :)
Claguen chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Poor Végéta ! Trunks is very funny, I could not stop laughing xD Baby finances (a) Thanks you !
Coofis chapter 1 . 1/13/2012

I enjoyed this, it was fun and well-written.

chocolateblood chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Best paragraph:

"How about some more ice cream?" Vegeta interjected, nearly throwing more bills into Trunks' face. "Go."

Very enjoyable after all the dark stuff I've been sifting through.
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