|Reviews for Noticed|
| Miss.Full.of.Light chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
I love love LOVE it! You're one of my favorite writers ever, so I had no doubt. The plot looks so original and I honestly can't wait for the next chapter, although I don't think this is too long, I certainly didn't fall asleep while reading it xD so I think it would have probably worked as a one shot all the same. ANYWAY, I also hope you'll post the other stories sometimes soon. :) Bye x3
| Mini Nicka chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Excellent story can't wait to see into Edwards thoughts
| Sweetdreams82 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I can't WAIT to find out Edward's lame arse excuse for being an epic douche! Bella SO should have taken Em up on his offer to give Edward a much deserved beat down. Really there is no justification for his rude behavior. And if he's going to turnaround and pull shite like he just did with Jacob then he owes her more of an explanation. Update!
| jerseyhalliwell chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
| LibraryLady08 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Very intriguing. Can't wait to read more. :)
| Saren Kol chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Interesting start. I am curious as to why Edward has such a problem with Bella.
| cheermom13 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
looking forward to the next chapter
| chanahope chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Great so far...update soon.