just re-read the story and o got to say you called it when it came to bonnny and her age

You know, if Naruto ever has to fight Kizaru in an enclosed space again, there are actually certain gasses that dramatically slow down light. Fight him in a room full of that,, and Kizaru won't be any faster than someone on a bicycle, literally. I think there is also at least one that actually speeds light up.

Have to say really enjoy the story I've read it a few times now and hope to see it updated in the near future but all in all really enjoy how well it's written and I use it to compare other naruto/one piece crossovers keep up the awesome writing

Does anybody know which chapters have the lemon in them?

Seeing as how it has been 7yrs since you’ve updated this story; I must express my deep sadness. This is an incredible tale you’ve woven and to leave it incomplete I feel is criminal. I hope you eventually find the inspiration to continue and complete this story sometime in the near future

If you do ever decide to reboot this I would suggest considering having him introduced later in the story.

As it stands he is just far too strong for any one except late grandline (and even that is only if you severely nerf him). Heck even logia’s would only be a challenge as he wouldn’t expect it. Given we know there are people in the Naruto verse who can turn into elements it wouldn’t be that shocking that an immortal Naruto would have learned how to deal with them.

Basically this story seems like it’s mostly going to be a story about “Naruto” (in quotations here as honestly in these two chapters he doesn’t really seem anything like Naruto except for liking ramen) just casually watching the Strawhats adventures as anytime he would intervene it would end the fight instantly with very few exceptions.

Also the whole element nations in the one piece world is a tough sell. Honestly how nobody on either side discovered the other is a bit hard to accept. I’d say go with Naruto ends up in one piece it makes more sense. Heck even something generic like the old cliche of falling through a portal after sealing Kaguya as her last ditch revenge makes more sense.

I mean you just casually state that nobody but Naruto was willing to leave the elemental nations in the first chapter for some reason? That makes no sense as there would always be those who are bored and want to explore yet apparently no ne of the chakra users but Naruto want to?

Honestly it would be cool if you rebooted this, I only just found this story and after like 7 years it’s safe to say you can’t really continue it as the fan base will have forgotten what happened.

Every character here has zero brain cells in an attempt at humour

Hi there i like ur story. May i translate IT into my acount? Of course with Ur name on IT

hey if you are still doing this story. have you ever thought about getting naruto an eisen dial. in the skypiea arc on of the four warriors that serves enel has an eisen dial attached to a sword hilt that generates eisen (iron cloudso its hard as iton and has all the properties of iron all he had to do was think about the shape he wanted and it would generate it he used it this way so he could have any kind of sword he wanted and when he wanted a different type he would use armament haki to snap off the blade and generate a new one in the new shape he wanted

I've enjoyed this but where is Kurama, he's obviously still sealed inside of Naruto. They haven't spoken to each other at all since this story began.

Looking forward to seeing this continue it’s really good.

had a blast reading this.. this story deserves its top rank of naruto x one piece.
hoping to see it completed in future

Yes part of her wants it, but reasonable things can blur the lines of why they don’t. For example, you could have a a conventionally attractive family that dictated your taste in women and your their reason for their tastes. This could result in some sweet home alabama with enough alcohol.

cool story, when does it continue? would like to read more