This was a good read. I loved how you took unknown characters and gave them fun personalities. You did a superb job, if I say so myself. Looks like this won’t be updated anymore so it’s a shame that it ended the way it did.

Kurama hasn't shown up. Is he asleep?

Please continue this story again

So, a new reader here and only up to chapter three. Haven't yet catch up to the latest arcs (500k worth of words? *gulp*), but this has been incredible so far. Not that that need saying, seeing the amount of followings and favorites the fic have.

I mean technically wouldn’t chakra be stronger then a devil fruit? I know some fruits are crazy with the power they give but legit the only downside to chakra would be chakra exhaustion but you can train for that as well. Also how is it the elemental nations are connected to one piece, I feel like a devil fruit would have at least showed up once or twice and how did the one piece world not know about the 1-4 wars that happened especially the 4th one

Thia naruto seems like he is all bark no bite. he literally says that he will kill Kuro multiple times and in the end purposefully underpowers his rasengan so that it doesnt hurt him. just seems stupid

when are you gonna update man, been waitinggg

Nah im already done after that Jango shit, for being a few decades old Naruto is still stupid enough to fall for that shit?

You know it was a quite interesting story but there is a massive problem . Especially since Naruto is in theory immortal . With all the feats that was shown in Naruto , surely he would have grown a lot stronger in base state . I mean Sasuke managed to get a speed boost and perhaps higher physical strength . We have shinobi that could wipe out cities and some may match the might of a Bijuu . Surely Naruto will have reach that same level and surpassed it well above them . Strange that Naruto cannot use haki after the timeskip .

I have to disagree with the Elemental Nations getting crushed by the World Government, but I can understand that one would dread a scenario where they fight. One shouldn't underestimate the Marines, both equipment wise and skill wise. Many of them have at least some skill in Rokushiki, which can be quite helpful against both Shinobi and Samurai and which can also lessen the weakness a Devil Fruit User has against water (i.e. water jutsu). Not to forget they also have quite a few monsters, when it comes to physical strength. Their guns should also prove to be quite quick against Genin and average Chunin, which propably make the bulk of the Shinobi Forces and their cannons do also pack quite the destructive power. That's not to say the World Government and the affiliated Nations can just whip out anywhere near their full fighting force at any time, but they can do plenty of damage with even a fraction. That said the Shinobi Forces aren't helpless against them, but they'd definitely face a challenge, especially if their fighting and warfare capabilities have grown rusty due to peace times. I'd say if it ever came to such a battle it could go either way and both sides would suffer heavy casualties, but if the Marines or the World Government in general "won" I could see them assimilating the Elemental Nations, which they'd need in hopes to restore their former fighting power.

Nah that bounty should be at least a billion. He basically went head to head with Kizaru and diddnt die instantly. That should already signal he’s at the admiral level, or at least vice admiral. Not to mention he kidnapped the princess of one of the 20 original countries

I was hoping that this kept going.
I now have no excuse. My stepdaughter's mom passed away when she was 9 She is now 13 and I am trying to find somewhere that will marry a 23 yo and a 13 yo.
I have not been using condoms with her. I hope that when she gets pregnant, ai can screw her daughter when she turns 10...if it's about, maybe convince the mom to raise it as a femboy.
KIDFUCK

I like this tashigi

This is my 4th time rereading this and I really hope u continue this amazing story

Great Fanfic, just ended too soon.