Reviews for JUNK |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter, the story's building up. Update some more. :) |
![]() ![]() Awesome first chapter. I especially liked the mission briefing part. Will try review the other chapters as soon as I can. :D -Laser Slayer |
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![]() ![]() this is really good except that you need to space it out because i can hardly read it :S xxxxx Lots of Love, Cherry-Blossom |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the way that you have put in a lot of detail and have really told the reader what is going on. Please update soon. FBR xx PS I have a new story up called In Trouble Again, please read and review it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hurray awesome chapter. Plz update more often you do it like once every 4/5 months. This is a really awesome story though you have to update more please allreader |
![]() ![]() ![]() gd FBR xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that this chapter was good, as you really showed the emotions that Will felt by the words he spoke. I also liked the way that in the first chapter James is not his usual self, as he has just taken a bullet. I really liked the way that you have invented your own characters and I look forward to reading some more chapters. Thanks for a great read, FreakyBookReader xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohai, this story is awesome! Keeeep Wriiiiting haha. /me read this in one sitting. :) Thanks for reviewing my story, btw. Sorry I haven't been able to read yours sooner, i'm kinda busy lol. - charlie (lilmisscandy) |
![]() ![]() ![]() First I want to say thanks for reviewing my story. Secondly I want to say that I really liked that chapter especially the mission briefing. It is a good idea and please continue it. FBR xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work! Now you have this keep updating and faster! allreader PS why was you're message called HELP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who's kent? Well I know already read it was in my favorites and alerts I just hadn't reviewed.I so love cliffie. Know write the next chapter you haven't for a long time. Its on a cliffie! allreader that was for chapter 4 here isfor chapter 5 Nice chapter. Wonder why Tracey survived without the police getting him? WRITE MORE NOW! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who's kent? Well I know already read it was in my favorites and alerts I just hadn't reviewed.I so love cliffie. Know write the next chapter you haven't for a long time. Its on a cliffie! allreader |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Molly and Will and the whole herub campus at the moment. Really good writing a long chapters I like mine short but yours are totally good. Though between Molly and Will make *** its easier to tell allreader |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel sorry for Hannah. She's going through a lot of stress related feelings right now. keep writing allreader |