Great chapter I love this story are you going to write more

Great story so far when u switch to Moopy Maybe put *** cause I tend to get confused also if Kevin Sumner is so old techinically James shouldn't be an agent anymore so maybe change the person

very nice(:

started really well, how long are you aiming for it to be?(:

please update soon(:

this is really good i think its started off really wel & i realy want to know more about the mision.

pleaspleaspleas update soon...got u on story alert :)

WeWillStandStrong: :Px

This is really cool! I love it! And I really want to know who Kent Eastwood is...

By the way, about the ages of Hannah and Will... "That had been when she was a baby, 8 years ago." and yet she's a teenager? A couple of years younger than James (I'm guessing 13-ish?).

Still, good.

hey, like this fan-fic! Just wondering, what happened to James? to like make hannah break down? ty 3 :))

I reckon this is turning out pretty good so far. It's started better than a lot of other cherub fics and I like the new characters, mainly hannah, but I wanted to know, at what point in the books is this set? a little bit before brigands mc or some other time?

plz write another chapter soon x like it but plz can u like not just focus on hannah bein in trouble x ;) & in the next chapter can u write more 'bout the mission x thnx ;)

think this is really good, please write next chapter x ;)