Reviews for Sir Aaron's Apprentice OLD
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 16 . 6/14/2016
I can't believe you stopped at the beginning of a climax. Damn...

I'll go over to your other one and I hope that you haven't dumped it.
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 13 . 6/14/2016
Whoa. Things just heated up!
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 6 . 6/14/2016
Oooo tension. Great to see the rocky start.
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 3 . 6/14/2016
Nice chapter. This story makes me feel like I have a sense of being there if that makes sense. This is a very capturing and addictive story.
Asutorido chapter 16 . 6/2/2014
I love this story
Echo the Slowpoke chapter 16 . 3/29/2014
This one is WAY better than the re-write, I read the re-write, an I was confused, A LOT there were a lot of plot holes, but in this version, I read no plot holes! This one is more solid, and much better than the new version
Guest chapter 16 . 3/19/2014
Even if U R redoing it how could U stop it HERE! TT
realisticFantasy chapter 16 . 1/29/2014
Man, what a place to stop at! Such an evil cliffhangar...dang! While there was a drop in quality in comparison to the rewritten version, this one isn't bad by any means! Although i will admit the gijinka thing was random. Not bad, necessarily, but definitely random. Anyway, i'm hooked hook, line and sinker. I hope you'll continue someday!
micky21 chapter 16 . 1/13/2014
please update more or make a sequel
Fire Nina chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Awww Palkia's sooooo kaiwaii!
Guest chapter 9 . 12/30/2012
Human evee must be so cute yet evil .evil cute is the best :3
Tanon chapter 16 . 5/28/2012
Well, good luck with rewriting it! Be sure to send me a link, because I don't have the time to check the new stories section of FFnet these days. I'm behind on updates. :3
ZXCVBNMEM chapter 16 . 5/24/2012

*Sad* *Sighs*...

...well, I'll be sure to check out the rewrite!

WhiteEagle1985 chapter 16 . 5/24/2012
I have subscribed to the new account so that I will get to read the rewrite. Not exactly happy with this news, but at least you aren't totally dropping the story! chapter 15 . 5/23/2012
please update this story is amazing
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