|Reviews for Second Division Prohibitions|
| CMBrockett chapter 14 . 10/31
Crack fic is right. I LOVE the whole thing. I look forward to whenever your muse returns
| amethystcorvo chapter 14 . 10/29
I've just finished reading this story Elvenarchress-san,and it was awesome!Too bad someone plagiarized your ideas...oh well,I hope you'll make another story 'cause you are a talented writer!_
| Style1234 chapter 14 . 10/28
OMG. Please continue your story. I love it very much. I also notice somebody copied off your work.
| HereIsMyCard chapter 3 . 10/10
I listen to those songs ... god Ace is an asshole to sings it x3 that's horrible..
sorry for my grammar...
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/19
My dear...I hope you don't mind...but I am going to use some of these on my boss and co workers. Vive les insanity!
| Winter Anime Fan chapter 13 . 8/7
This so funny, I'm cracking up! And then my parents ask me "What's so funny?" So yeah. I have a suggestion! Have Ace kidnap Luffy and not tell his crew but leave a note telling the Strawhats where he is... An island where the Moby Dick is docked.
1)You may not kidnap your brother. Even if he lets you kidnap him.
2)Especially if you don't tell his crew. We don't need those people ambushing our ship in a successful attempt to get him back.
3)You my not make your division sit down and listen to you talk to your brother about his adventures. Or listen to you tell his crew about him when you were kids.
4) You are not allowed to randomly burst into tears. And when asked why say, "My brother's dead." We only know about Luffy. And we all know he's alive.
And then have them apologize because Sabo is dead. Or so they thought. But...
5) You are not allowed to build a massive shrine on deck to you dead brother. Build it in your room.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL
| Kagamine Miharu chapter 13 . 7/22
THIS IS SIMPLY THE MOST HILARIOUS FIC I'VE EVER READ x'D
oh how I love Ace and his idiocy *lol*
really, really love this fic! *thumbs up! XD
| asce chapter 1 . 7/20
SERIOUSLY, ACE?! *ROTFL*
GOSH, THIS IS SO HILARIOUS!
| Jonah's Hair chapter 1 . 7/11
56. The D in my name is not a license to do idiotic things.
Totally untrue. And it really isn't fair that you your making him not act idiotic when all the other D's *caughluffycaugh* get to.
| Yuki Artsa chapter 1 . 5/10
| jOnAh'S hAiR chapter 1 . 3/26
OH MY GAWD! THIS IS THE MOST AWESOMELY FANTABULOUS THING EVER!
| guest chapter 10 . 2/13
"the marines are paranoid enough" these all are so much win, thank you so much for writing! my dad was looking at me as if I had lost it xDDD Ace is pure gold isn't he? for me he's alive, ALIVEEEEE!
| RainbowGuardian13 chapter 14 . 12/3/2014
You have got to be the most amazing person ever to make such an amazing story it's unfortunate to hear that you had this story plagerized but it's good to know the plagerized story has been taken down I hope you gain more inspiration for this story soon.
| partner555 chapter 14 . 11/26/2014
This was awesome all the way!