Reviews for Second Division Prohibitions
Pchew chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
I seriously wish I could favorite this more than once XD It just keeps getting better!
Chibi-Onee-chan chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
I love all of these, especially 549 and 550. The fruit marriage was hilarious too. Can't wait for more :3
DELETE MY ACC chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
That was... Amazing.
Oh Ace... XD God, I fckin love him!
I can't think of any suggestion right now...
Katzztar chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
LOL real pitty thatAce hasn't met Usopp around this time...I'll just daydream of a world where he's alive and the Strawhats have some down time around the Whitebeard pirates... rule 543 is JUST asking for a meeting between Ace & Usopp "543: Even if it isn't Blamenco's, I still may not carry a giant hammer around."

Ace would LOVE any of Usopp's joke hammers.
The 5 ton-its huge, it had two frying pans inside to make a terrible clanging...and if you've ever been hit by a frying pan to the head, imagine how horrible it be with two!
the 10 ton- doesn't have the frying pans, but it inflates instantly and when it pops it unleashes light & noise.
Either one would scare the pants off the unsuspecting.
...and in the upcoming movie 'Z', Usopp will have the long awaited 100 ton hammer ...cant' wait to see what it does but sure Ace would enjoy it
Mai Kusakabe chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
The fruit part seems something to annoy Marco xD
Ace’s got a problem with identifying gender or what? O.o
533… Can I write an one-shot about THAT? *-* Though I’ve never written a story in English before.
As always, I love the crazy stunts Ace pulls off *-* (Do you want some cookies, Ace?)
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I like it! **
Grz chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
sweet please continue
praeses chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
I spy some Discworld references! Even if they are unintentional, I really have to read those books. I loved the last two about watering Crocus and feeding him fertilizer. Oh, I got a suggestion: I may not dress up like a real estate agent and sell Marine bases for profit. Ah, the things you can come up with thanks to a little inspiration from your neighbors... -praeses
2290356 chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
Still awesome. I see stuff from Ice Ace 3 and Wizard of Oz.
Shiary chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
ANON OF DOOM chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
I died from laughing. XD I LOVE this!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
Omg you wrote another chapter,I'm so happy
ladeste chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
Highly entertaining as usual :)
Keep up the amazing work!
LunaStories chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
How did he get there? O.o xD Sorry I just HAD to ask lol I really loved numbers 501,548,549, and basically all of it :D But seriously, I'm glad I'm not the only one that thinks Crocus looks like a flower . Poor commanders...I would have a very tired maniac smile too if I had to deal with Ace O.o
But seriously...why even try to make rules when you clearly know he will always find a way to break it...X3
Please make more! :3
LunaStories chapter 9 . 7/19/2012
Are we still playing the game? :D Cus if so then I guess: Skypiea, Pirates of the Carribean, Leprechans xD
On the other hand, this was very funny :D I love it from Whitebeards point of view :) It's just hilarious xD I loled at him "handily doing all five at the same time." cus it seems that sitting there doing nothing can count as doing five things xD
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