Reviews for Second Division Prohibitions
Pchew chapter 4 . 7/20/2011
If it wasn't 1 A.M. and my sister wasn't sitting next to me, and I knew where my inhaler was I would have laughed until I passed out. These rules are pure win. I miss Ace ;w;

Rule 251: I. AM. NOT. ALLOWED. TO. DIE.
Anon chapter 4 . 7/20/2011
I love this. Simple as that.
Shiary chapter 4 . 7/20/2011
you have a few repeats:

224. No, I may not push the shiny red button

225. I am not allowed to "repair" things.

226. Nor may I take stuff apart and not bother to put it back together afterwards.

227. I may not follow instructions backwards to "see what happens".

228. Nor may I throw out the instructions completely

but otherwise AWSOME! I cant stop laughing no matter how many times I read this!
FishyBlobby chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
Ahahahahahaha, this is golden crack. XD

Love it! 3
Eliza Flamekeys chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
154. I may not dress up in a bunny suit.

175. I may not sing "Row, row, row, your boat", "99 bottles of beer", "This is the song that never ends" or "It's a small world" ever again.

191. Marco is not a giant chicken.

Eliza Flamekeys chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
224. No, i may not push the shiny red button

xD! holy crap! D:!
Eliza Flamekeys chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
you forget one!

"i may not yell to my crew saying that there is a fire and waiting them for asking "where?" and then i answer "in my pants!" and the off it"

o_o jajaja

i love this chapter! the list is the best!

i cannot stop laughting! xD so fuuny!

the worst part is that i imagine ace doing that things!

i spelly like the part about marco and luffy

tha pineapple! xD!

the wanted poster!

god! you made me the day :)
Shiary chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
awsome please think up some more. actually having Ace and Luffy work together to prank whitebeard would be funny. you have a few mistakes.
Ruby chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
This is absolutely HILARIOUS! (And no, not just because its nearly 4am where i am haha) I love this, plzz add more XD
Shiary chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
How about: I cant burn all flammable things on the ship and say it was dangerous for others...
amreed chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
this is wonderful I LOVE YOU!
Tropicall chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
Yay, a second chapter!

I particularly liked the one where, no, he wasn't allowed to make a sun to stick up his ass xD

Great finish, although I'm sad to see it end. :)
El Elegido chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
OK This was a blast since the very begining, and even if it is crack... I can imagine Ace doing some if not the majority of the things in this list. This is an Ecxelent whriting and this site needs more funny storyes like this one.
Don'tletthewingsfoolyou chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
LOL! This is funny
Guard-y nut chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Hell Yea! Noone stops Ace from bragging, especially about Luffy!
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