Reviews for After A Piece of Our Forever
LaylaLolly chapter 14 . 7/19/2011
I reeeealllllllllyyyyy wish you could finish this story! I love your writing!
Guest chapter 12 . 10/18/2010
super awesome _ll
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 13 . 10/15/2010



I waz like screaming soo loudly when embry nd serenity kissed at the end mi mom thought i waz crazy lol

lol thiz is amazing i mean this is MY favorite fanfiction like EVER

ur such an amazong writerr

Yay yay yay yaaaaaay embry and serenity r back together!

Cant wait till serenity completly forgets pretty rich boys name lol u kno how much i cared about evan right? Lol sarcasm to the max

Embrey is so so soooo sweet but i LOVED his angry side!

Agnry embrey rulz lol the kissing scene was sooooo hot lol

I bet Emmett and rose will be thrilled that their daughters back w/ him and protective Emmett soo cute

Tottally lovd the Alice bashing lol Sigh i deeply want an embrey for by boyfriend

Thanks for the shout out lol i feel so special lol But ur story iz Ah mazing soo im sooo happy i found it

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz pl
Breaking chapter 12 . 10/9/2010
Hey Dawn, congrats. The whole story makes sense, fits into the system, keeps me reading and enjoying. If SM should not continue with her stories I very much hope YOU WILL! Make the Cullen family grow and show that even eternal live never gets boring. Looking forward for the next chapters - and: you should find a publisher and make him market your talent!
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 12 . 10/8/2010
Omg yay yay yay yay yay yay yaaay evan iz gone lol jk i will secratly be mourning his death

Poor him i mean the way he died sucked. Gettn killed by a vamp while ur girlfrind who is a vampire finds u dead BUT on the extremly bright side theres EMBRY lol

i cnt wait for the 2 of them to b togrther again

lov lov loov embry call when me nd my sister saw new moon we started squeling like some edward obbsessed fangurls when embrey was eating a muffin at emilys house in new moon lol

Also emmett nd rosalie are cuming back GASP lol wonder if thell like that she didnt stay with embry nd went for the rich kid i bet rose wouldnt have minded that cuz she hates the wolfs

plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update A.S.A.P

oh ya nd thnx soo much for puttn me in ur A.N this story iz like my own personal brand of herion lol twilight refrence

plzzzzzzzz update SOON!

MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 11 . 10/6/2010
No no no

serenity nd wats hiz name pretty boy should not be together let alone him kissing her lik that lol

where iz embrey when all of thiz is happeng?

Lol im jk u kno i lov this story!

U HAVE to update asap i need to kno wat happns nxt

plz plz plz plz plz plz update sooooon!
dddawn chapter 7 . 10/6/2010
Awwee. Long time no read. Been busy. U2 I see. Can't wait 2 read more
ellabell chapter 10 . 10/5/2010
I love this story so far please update soon
lmr2332 chapter 10 . 10/4/2010
Great Chapter!
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 9 . 10/1/2010
Lol I loved this chapter!

ButThen again I lov alll ur chapters

Omg evan seemes so cutee but I still love embrey nd serenity

i just hope embrey doesn't see the 2 of them together cuz that would not b good lol

I love darcy she's my new fav character lol

Anyway you already kno that I looove ur story nd if u 4got then I do

I cnt wait for another chapter!
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 8 . 9/30/2010
Okay I love this! And no gurl u r not going too quickly lol

I cnt wait to read more nd I LOVD maggie nd serenity together it makes sense that she would have a friend to talk with all the drama that's going on with

Plz Update asap!
GoWolves chapter 6 . 9/26/2010
I would love 4 Embry to imprint on Serenity. Is it 2 late? :(

The rollercoaster was gr8. Funny n so Emmett. I can totally see that happening.

I knew it was ALice. haha
GoWolves chapter 5 . 9/26/2010
Ooohhhh. I know who it is. Already looked, couldnt help it. lol
MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 7 . 9/25/2010

Freaking amazingly amazing chapter

I absolutly loved the father daughter parts with emmett btw!

I suppose emmety and rose took the news well jk

I can't belive they would leave though I mean, it's a good thing they cnt really forbid serenity from seeing embrey anyway that would be romeo and juliet bad lol I ment to say I hoppe embrey dosen't imprint on someone else cuz that would SUCK

She Basically just lost her family cuz of embry plz plz plz plz update soon

Emmett rose nd serenity need, to have a very Dr phil heartwarming moment where they 4give serenity cuz leaving her iz kinda mean even though i kno rose hates werewolf's nd all lol

cnt wait to read more!
LaylaLolly chapter 7 . 9/24/2010
Regarding beta status: How did Embry get this role ahead of Seth? Is it just due to his age? I thought Seth became Jake's beta when he was the first to join the renegade pack? (as in Breaking Dawn)

I really don't like that Edward, from the beginning, has been so upset with the creation of Serenity. His actions were far more troublesome for the family (getting the Volturi pissed by letting Bella in on the secret) than by R&E simply letting one human die (which seems like she was probably aware that death was a possibility)...this is why I am more interested in the backstory. The family all stood behind Edward's decisions (even Rose, altho she was bitter), but when someone else is "controversial", he gets his panties in a bunch? Does he think he gets preferred status or something? But it's true to the character, so I'm not complaining about that part of the storyline (just so we're clear). Also, if they injected Katelynn with venom, as opposed to biting her, they technically didn't break the treaty, correct?

I'm so psyched for the rest! Keep up the fabulous work!
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