Reviews for Room 18
Jasper's Darlin' Kathy chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
I really enjoyed your story. It was very good.

Kathy :D
it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Good for Bella. Glad she spoke up
litanolastar chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
This was great! I loved it!
Mrs. VampDiva Belikov chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Awesome story!
Lizzard43 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
I enjoyed this story. I loved how I felt all of Bella's emotions. You described them so well. That would have been really nerve racking but she took the plunge and boy did it work out for her. Even though you didn't give us Carlisle's thoughts, I knew that he was doubting himself...the age thing, what if she is disappointed, could he do this? I loved the ending, but I have one question. How many condoms did they use? LOL
XxX.Love The Devil.XxX chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Nice :)
Just a Girl INACTIVE chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
I can't fathom why I haven't read this or any of your stories sooner, I know I've clicked to read them, but then things dribble away and I forget.

*Sigh*

I would give anything for a guy to do that to me! These days they just maul you and expect you to enjoy it. Bleh!

Anyway, lovely! You missed a few punctuation points, but other than that, fabulous!

Naughty Bella and Doctor Carlisle. haha. I love Bella and Carlisle, I think there is something more about a mature man. haha.

-Nerdette
Sillyrabbittwilightsforkids chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
I love Carlisle stories! Yay!
together25x3 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
LOVED IT!
JXB Addicted chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
That was really really good! TTFN! JXB ;0)
justluey chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
I really liked their story.
MustangMel1968 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Very nice!
majose chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
I don't like non-cannon pairings, but I like this story :-)
Every Rose Has Its Thorn24 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
DAMN GOOD CARLISLE AND BELLA STORY. I LOVED THIS. AWESOME JOB.
futuregirl1709 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Since I love LLB so much, I thought I'd check out your other stories. And this is very different, but also a very nice, quick read.

I like the description of Bella's feelings, her uncertainty and insecurity while waiting for Daddy C.

I thought it was very unlike the Carlisle you described that he had sex with Bella while he was technically still married to Esme. Then again, he is human so he has to have some flaws, so it does make the story more real.

Aside from a few typos, it's a good oneshot and I had fun reading it!
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