Reviews for Ursa Luna
Josef Engle chapter 12 . 8/17/2011
nice flow and streaming on the characters,the dr. was a bit outta place but assholes come in all professions I guess (even reviewersLOL),

gnomelover chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
Loved it!
Evangeline-Sibeliah chapter 4 . 11/2/2010
That "I'm sorry" line was a truly effective way to end the chapter. Moving.

Evangeline-Sibeliah chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Hmm, I wonder why only 1 person commented on this story. So far it looks like a good quality M-rated stuff. Maybe it's because of the thin fandom?

Seriously, I think you're doing great.

Zephyr Morpheus Lee chapter 7 . 10/21/2010
Oh, dude. I totally saw that coming.


excellent chapter, and I'm glad you're using Xenos for something important; most people would bring him in and then not use him for much at all. Very refreshing. Aside from a few grammatical errors, this is a fabulously written chapter.
Zephyr Morpheus Lee chapter 6 . 10/21/2010
I admit I'm a little curious about how you plan on using Xenos here; it's a great chapter, though. :P
Zephyr Morpheus Lee chapter 5 . 10/19/2010
There actually was one for Ursa Luna. It was a little flash movie that lasts about five minutes on a promotional site for Pitch Black. For future reference, he only spent 11 hours and 22 minutes there.

www . pitchblack blackbox / slamcity . html

Ditch the spaces, follow the link. :D