|Reviews for A Son's Denial|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
good grief, you even have to ask if we're interested in your brilliant stories continuing?! in case the answer isn't clear, heck, yes, continue!
| Solace chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Nick being over dramatic is simply part of his nature. Is Faust supposed to represent Nick in your story? I know the character makes a pact with the devil for all of the knowledge and pleasures the world has to offer. In return the devil- or LaCroix- will own Faust’s - or Nick’s- soul. In the most famous version, Faust is always striving for redemption and his soul is saved in the end. But earlier versions have his soul be damned and carried off by the devil. Is this supposed to represent Nick giving up on redemption, being eternally damned, with him declaring LaCroix won? And does that mean Natalie represents Gretchen, always interceding to help Nick find redemption? Your use of literary comparisons in these stories is subtle and wonderful. Very well thought out and intricate plots. I would've reviewed sooner, but life happens. Your stories are so much fun and your writing skills are so amazing, I can't wait for more!
| Steppah chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Poor Nick. He was starting to wonder what he'd gotten himself into in that flashback. Not to mention what he'd gotten himself into in the present. But isn't that always the way? LaCroix makes a decision and Nick get's pulled into his schemes.
Love to see Natalie and LaCroix fighting over Nick. Your stories are too much fun. Please continue. :)
| New LaCroix Fan chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
No one does smug better than LaCroix. And you wrote it perfectly.
Even after accepting his father back into his lifr, I enjoyed how you retained some of Nick's ambivalence to his chosen life. I feel for both LaCroix wanting his son back and Nat after everything she's done for Nick only to have him give up. If only she and LaCroix could share Nick.
But LaCroix doesn't share...
I'll review your last story soon, though I hope it won't be the last one!
| jeffhardyfan722 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I enjoyed both "A Father's Truth" and "A Son's Denial" Both stories are very well written and I for one would love to read more.
| reviewer chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
I love the Nick&Lacroix relationship. It was wonderful to read a fic where they're trying to get along (I support Lacroix's devious means!)
| cursedgirl chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
more..more..please hurry up! )
| moon cutie chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Awesome fic. I would love a sequel. I do hope the father/son relationship continues on to the end of the next though. I love a good reconciliation fic.
| Queen Ame chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
A worthy sequel to a great story! Please continue. :)
| Rocky181 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
interesting I like to see where it leads to.
| fkfforever chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Yes. Please continue!
| rainy day chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Great story! I look forward to reading more!
| Kyer chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Now, THAT's the Lacroix I know!
(Kyer not a Cousin, but is a Cousin of the Knight.)
Lord, reading this not only took me back to the heyday of the FORKNI fan forums, but it also wasn't about an oc or kids, or romance heavy. Kudos! Been a long time since I've truly been able to enjoy a serious FK fic. :)