Reviews for The beginning of the end
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Lol u just made an your own version of the beginning of code geass. That didnt suck that was awesome! If the original code geass started like that code geass would probably be a yaoi anime lol full of smex
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
Poor Lelouch.

Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
Wow ! And Clovis said it wouldn't happen but it did hah in your face scheizel u abused lelouch that's why u were first killed man and lelouch was only ten and he's experiencing child sexual abuse (CSA) :-) luv your story I always read your story first before I read the others:-) :-) :-) :-) !
flamingpluffy chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Dear disenchantedlife,
This fan-fiction had been one of my favorites to read with this pairing of three to this series. I love this even its in a way somewhat not both sided in a way not. My favorite line is ("He was only ten..." Clovis whispered to himself, upset that he and Schneizel had possibly caused Lelouch a lot of emotional damage, maybe enough to drive him absolutely insane...insane enough to become a terrorist and try and destroy not only the Imperial family, but all of Britannia...Nah, that was too farfetched...) I loved the detail, the character depiction, and nicely this story was placed together. Thank you for a great read, and for your time,
Sincerely,
flamingpluffy
reije chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
just the ending (that sucked) :P

but I like how you made Schneizel evil till the end and Clovis the stupid airhead nice but sometimes mature brother. Though I think Lelouch is kinda a bit too young, but I guess that's the angst in it huh? I'm sure you were rushed at the ending (I do that too sometimes, xD) so it seemed really funny, I kinda laughed, hahaha xD

anyways, a good read ! Thanks for writing
Lucifer The Morning Star chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
This is realy good you should make a sequal
Freaxx chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
*grin* amazing
kariouling chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Hi there!

I normally do not enjoy scribble-like/crack stories, but the pairing (yay for prince-threesome) definitely hooked me. It was kind of hot and meant to be PWP, so the lack of story is excused. It is nearly impossible to come up with a story leading to that sexcapade anyway. And the following lines totally made my day (night):

"He was only ten..." Clovis whispered to himself, upset that he and Schneizel had possibly caused Lelouch a lot of emotional damage, maybe enough to drive him absolutely insane...insane enough to become a terrorist and try and destroy not only the Imperial family, but all of Britannia...Nah, that was too farfetched...

It explains sooo much! Thanks for enlighting me, NOW I understand Lulu's motive...

Genius! ;)

-Kl
gya740117 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I can actually somehow imagine this...
MeMiMoMemories chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
That was amazing.
OrgasmicYaoi chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
his brothers are jerks *scoffs* suzaku is a sweetheart. Poor Lulu TT
violetkisses chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
no, i love it actually! it does not suck. hahahha, more of this threesome please :)
Skiperella chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
It's alrcturlly really good!

Got me turned on in the middle ;D...it kind of got sketchy at the end though...But still pretty good~ Love your work!
my name is paper YAH chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
that was a bit below par from what you've usually done, but i a way, enjoyable. I love clovis's thoughts on the possible emotional trauma consequences. Amusing :)