|Reviews for White Flag|
| bookfangirl18 chapter 11 . 9/8
SO BEAUTIFUL I READ IT ALL IN A DAY AND IT KEPT ME FROM DOING U.S. HISTORY
| elephant123 chapter 11 . 9/5
great plot change idk tho it kinda was weird wktk the island and such
| njgscn chapter 11 . 8/11
What a great way to wrap this story with a wedding, just as you started it. This time though, they're marrying the right one. Thanks for this! Another Rose x Scorpius to add to my favourites :)
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/14
I had tears in my eyes while reading
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/30/2015
This is a well written story and you are a wonderful writer. Maybe stories like this appeal to people who get their cheap thrills from angst and love triangles between cousins but I sure as hell don't. Don't mean to be rude but I don't understand how Scorpius can cheat on Rose with her cousin and then proceed to marry that cousin 'cause it made sense despite loving Rose more than the said cousin? It doesn't make sense to me. Whoever does that in real life is horrible. I like that you wrote something other than how generally ScoRose stories are but every reason (excuse?) Scorpius gave to Rose for marrying the wrong girl or kissing the wrong girl seemed vague. I stand by what I said earlier, you are an amazing writer but I didn't like the plot or Scorpius' justification one bit.
| rokukko chapter 3 . 10/3/2015
i was here to have a good time but i feel attacked. srsly. waaay to break someone heart at 2 am and you dare to leave cliffhanger at the end of chap 1 so that i have to read them all because my heart hurts. but you didn't disappoint tho
and idk but i love the difference between minister words in lily's and rose's wedding. in lily's he said 'I now pronounce you husband and wife' but in rose's 'I declare you bonded for life' like even the minister knew they'll ne together for life? and idk im so happy
| Chloroforme chapter 11 . 9/22/2015
That was beautiful! I totally loved your story. The characters were perfect, original, interesting. And it was always unexpected. Thanks!
| TooManyShipsI'llSink chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
That first chapter was the sweetest fucking chapter I have every read, but the most heartbreaking!
| Allison Denise chapter 11 . 4/19/2015
This is such a beautiful story, I just couldn't stop reading! I absolutely adore your writing style :) I'm going to go check out your other fics, but so far this one is my favorite! Keep up the great work!
| cindylili chapter 11 . 3/22/2015
My favorite part of this story was the beginning, and the five questions scene. You can really feel the emotions throughout ;)
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/1/2015
First of all, your story is one of my favorites. I've read a lot of Scorose fanfics but I just love yours because it seems so powerful. I can really connect with Rose and her pain ( I might have teared up on a few spots). While there was plenty of angst I was happy to see that Rose and Scorpius found their happy ending. This story has a wonderful plot and an exceptional writer! :) -K
| a-witch-in-a-muggle-world chapter 1 . 2/14/2015
I thought it was a short story
I thought it was sweet and good
It was not it was sad and it made me mad
A poem by me
| gryphae chapter 11 . 1/24/2015
besides i was crying from the beginnig till fourth chapter speaks for itself... and i'm very happy about another wonderful scorose story! you just got the characters and their sometimes stupid stubborn problems, also great plottwists (scorpius auror training, FIRST CHAPTER!...) even if some of them were notable before ;D
(i apologise for any mistakes, greetings from germany ;D)
| Shadows chapter 3 . 10/23/2014
Your character Isabella Lefevre was mentioned to have gone to school with Fleur, who is older than Harry Potter. Why would James kiss and go out with a woman older than his father? Was that a mistake on your part, or did you do that on purpose? (Don't be mad, I'm just trying to clarify things.)
| Kikitiki chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Oh dear god... what have you done! I knew something was fishy! Oh no! Don't tell me that it's Lily! Oh please don't!