|Reviews for White Flag|
| rokukko chapter 3 . 10/3
i was here to have a good time but i feel attacked. srsly. waaay to break someone heart at 2 am and you dare to leave cliffhanger at the end of chap 1 so that i have to read them all because my heart hurts. but you didn't disappoint tho
and idk but i love the difference between minister words in lily's and rose's wedding. in lily's he said 'I now pronounce you husband and wife' but in rose's 'I declare you bonded for life' like even the minister knew they'll ne together for life? and idk im so happy
| Chloroforme chapter 11 . 9/22
That was beautiful! I totally loved your story. The characters were perfect, original, interesting. And it was always unexpected. Thanks!
| TooManyShipsI'llSink chapter 1 . 7/10
That first chapter was the sweetest fucking chapter I have every read, but the most heartbreaking!
| allison denise chapter 11 . 4/19
This is such a beautiful story, I just couldn't stop reading! I absolutely adore your writing style :) I'm going to go check out your other fics, but so far this one is my favorite! Keep up the great work!
| cindylili chapter 11 . 3/22
My favorite part of this story was the beginning, and the five questions scene. You can really feel the emotions throughout ;)
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/1
First of all, your story is one of my favorites. I've read a lot of Scorose fanfics but I just love yours because it seems so powerful. I can really connect with Rose and her pain ( I might have teared up on a few spots). While there was plenty of angst I was happy to see that Rose and Scorpius found their happy ending. This story has a wonderful plot and an exceptional writer! :) -K
| a-witch-in-a-muggle-world chapter 1 . 2/14
I thought it was a short story
I thought it was sweet and good
It was not it was sad and it made me mad
A poem by me
| gryphae chapter 11 . 1/24
besides i was crying from the beginnig till fourth chapter speaks for itself... and i'm very happy about another wonderful scorose story! you just got the characters and their sometimes stupid stubborn problems, also great plottwists (scorpius auror training, FIRST CHAPTER!...) even if some of them were notable before ;D
(i apologise for any mistakes, greetings from germany ;D)
| Shadows chapter 3 . 10/23/2014
Your character Isabella Lefevre was mentioned to have gone to school with Fleur, who is older than Harry Potter. Why would James kiss and go out with a woman older than his father? Was that a mistake on your part, or did you do that on purpose? (Don't be mad, I'm just trying to clarify things.)
| TheHallow chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
Oh dear god... what have you done! I knew something was fishy! Oh no! Don't tell me that it's Lily! Oh please don't!
| mavywavy123 chapter 10 . 7/12/2014
this review is for the whole story. i think it's brilliant! thank you so much for just writing this story!
| Magical Miss chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT AT ALL WOW YOUR WRITING IS REALLY GOOD THIS IS GREAT IM EXCITED TO READ THE REST. THE LAST LINE IS SO PERFECT YO'RE AMAZING OKAY
| TheWhoLockedSupernaturalist chapter 11 . 1/21/2014
That was awesome. That is all I can say.
| ilikemnms chapter 11 . 1/11/2014
If this is a year later who's marriage was the other one that month? Lily and Lorcan?
Fantastic 'novella' by the way. I loved the use of the word in the A/N in one of the chapters.
| ilikemnms chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Oh my God, she's just a bridesmaid and he's marrying someone else?