Reviews for An Ending is a Beginning
Pixiebookworm chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Normally, I don't support Neville/Hannah pairings, but the way that you write them makes me like them as a couple. Generally, I just can't wrap my mind around the two being romantically compatible, but you characterize them so sweetly. I love Hannah and how she eventually gets a hold on her fear of death.

Keep up the good work.
DramioneLurver chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Aw, that was so sweet! I love the ending, even though I completely expected her to die. Lovely descriptions of different times in her life that she interacted with death.

And don't fret about the length; I myself have written oneshots twice as long! XD Sometimes you just need to get it all out! Every bit added something.

Wonderful work!
hot chocolate mess chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Oh wow this made me want to cry. It is excellant. I really like it.
justalittle l o o n y chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Aww, I love how motherly Hannah is. Even as a child...
Screaming Faeries chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Wow, good start and interesting take on Hannah!
LAHH chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Really lovely. Thanks for writing. x
msllamalover chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I loved this story. You got into Hannah's head through a subject which is so sad, but so natural, and you revealed her to us little by little. The section with Neville, the dialogue was so real, and I loved how she interacted with everyone. I also liked the moments you chose, because they weren't just the ones I'd expected - the battle, her mother etc - but you went futher than that, and it really worked. The only crit I have (and it's not even about your writing or the subject matter) is: I didn't notice it before, and I don't know if it's just me, but I find the '~' a little jarring as I'm reading. '-' is much smoother :)

SoUsay234 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
The last line is genius. :) I liked the part with Neville and the pregnancy and everything was genius.
alieboo chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
I really liked it! It really had alot of emotion in it! Your also have alot of talent in your writing!