|Reviews for After the Fall|
| Kurisuta358 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
This was quite the interesting story. I enjoyed your depiction of Katara's internal guilt and desolation she must have felt after Jet's disapearance. I never considered that she would still hang on to that remorse, considering how they never brought up Jet again throughout the rest of the series.
You were slightly redundant in your choice of Katara's actions, though. "She swallowed thickly" is a lovely description, but it was used several times without a lengthy gap in between the two. This is just me going overboard with specificity, though, so don't mind me._'
Overall, good job.
| Penelope Applegate chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
ACK! You threw me off with the Katara & Zuko.
I'm not gonna lie, Jet was totally the last person I was expecting. I pretty much forgot about him... Um... oops... /
I liked it tho. Awesome :)
| CelticGoddess1986 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
*wibble* I was never a huge Jet fangirl but his death STILL bothers me! I really like how you tried to give his story more closure than we got in the show. I assume we're allowed to fill in whoever we want as her hubby (ZUKO!) which I love. I'm always a fan of stories where you can put your own spin on them. Lovely lovely story, a great piece to tide me over between Chong Sheng chapters *nudge nudge wink wink*